"To Treasure"

A very timely poem for me. Thank you.

hey Shirley.Just stopped in for a quick read.I find no need of suggestions or corrections.After you pick self up from fainting via shock lol,please know it was a very pleasant read.....scribbler

Such a lovely tender feel to this poem! It is profound! Very nice work, Shirley. Love-Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

Good stuff, simply beautiful Much love Lou Xx

Here are some suggestions for you to consider. Mostly they are to improve the flow but also to help extend the imagery etc. Ciao cara, Keith The scent of sweet treasure locked deep in your heart that perfume so special from which you cannot part A man a woman two aspects of one desire something so breathtaking to cherish and admire

SHirls your poem is taking you to higher grounds.. Great work once again as Prof says ciao cara Bella Mona xoxox

oops there it goes again

Sorry I have been really busy the last few days I had an aunt pass but I finally got to this one .. I read it the other night and thought of some suggestions and got five minutes today to put it together for you this is just how I would have written it .. and if you like any of my changes your very welcome to them love JayCee A trove of sweet treasure locked deep in your heart to have something so special that which you cannot part A man and a woman with an object of awe something so breathtaking to be cherished and adored I regard it with quality with tender loving care and with it lasting forever it will always be there! (“To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.” ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson quote)

This is light, sweet, smooth, airy. I like it as is, actually!

Ann of Norway Not up to as much of a comment that this deserves My love to you keep writing. Ann XXOO "to be cherished and adored" do you need AND?

It seems there's love in the air with a lot of poets today. Great write. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

And I found the gold, a great poet! Peace and love, Lil Z

sentimentality to the point of nausea. Niceness is avoiding truth. Cheers, Jess, Praise helps no poet, have the courage and generousity to give critique.