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Jul 15, 2010
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Juxtaposiion
Juxtaposition
Just now I heard the clock un-tick
and thought it very strange
that timelessness could be so sick
or quick to rearrange
my concept of reality
with which I wrestle when
my mind ignores normality
on which it should depend
Insanity can be a tool
or it can be a curse
depending on how fast a fool
can go from bad to worse
so as I walk new paths of dream
into parts unknown
my alter-ego starts to scream
afraid to be alone
I pierce a veil of time and space
no soul has breached before
and there, come standing face to face,
with Albert Einstein's whore
just then I heard the clock un-tick
and thought it very strange
that timelessness could be so sick
or quick to rearrange.......
C. Lon R. Bruso
Just now I heard the clock un-tick
and thought it very strange
that timelessness could be so sick
or quick to rearrange
my concept of reality
with which I wrestle when
my mind ignores normality
on which it should depend
Insanity can be a tool
or it can be a curse
depending on how fast a fool
can go from bad to worse
so as I walk new paths of dream
into parts unknown
my alter-ego starts to scream
afraid to be alone
I pierce a veil of time and space
no soul has breached before
and there, come standing face to face,
with Albert Einstein's whore
just then I heard the clock un-tick
and thought it very strange
that timelessness could be so sick
or quick to rearrange.......
C. Lon R. Bruso
— Lonnie, Jul 15, 2010
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Critiques
Rett
15 years 10 months ago
Dang it Lonnie
Lonnie
15 years 10 months ago
Thanks, Rett!
Candlewitch
15 years 10 months ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
15 years 10 months ago
Thank you, Cat!
Professor Purple
15 years 10 months ago
A great one!
Lonnie
15 years 10 months ago
Thanks, Antoine!
Roscoe Lane
15 years 10 months ago
Perfect,
Lonnie
15 years 10 months ago
Thank you, Roscoe!
Lil Z
15 years 10 months ago
Awesome!
Lonnie
15 years 10 months ago
Thanks, Lil Z!
scribbler
15 years 10 months ago
physics
Lonnie
15 years 10 months ago
Thank you, Stan!
poewriter58
15 years 10 months ago
Lon
Lonnie
15 years 10 months ago
Thank you, Dearest!
Seren
15 years 10 months ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
15 years 10 months ago
Thanks JayCee!
loved
15 years 10 months ago
u r so wonderful