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Lady Wraith
Lady Wraith
By: eddy styx
Your shadow draws shorter devouring itself,
As sweet morning light wanes into noon.
The time of day when all seeming
Loses its resplendent illusions,
And the clandestine mystery of twilight
Is swept under the vast carpet of day.
Echoes of your fading smiles
Are lost in the horizon of introspection.
your lonely soul is stranded and confined
In the wasteland of the nowhere of in-between.
Your heart speaks to mine of darkest isolation
And its need of resolution's saving grace.
Consolation is a solution of ultimate absolution.
But I am withered and agonizing in the dawning
Of sorrow's revelation that I am not "the one!"
Not your special "someone" who can release you,
All the wanting in my world will not make it so.
With all my bleeding heart, I cling
To the perfection of your rhythm,
As the killing realization floods me that I must let you go.
This knowing reverberates through my being,
And your fingers slip from my grasp
Critiques
Lonnie
15 years 10 months ago
I'm honored to be first!
Candlewitch
15 years 10 months ago
Dear Lonnie
Lil Z
15 years 10 months ago
I'm honored to have even read this!
Candlewitch
15 years 10 months ago
Hello Lil Z
faithmairee
15 years 10 months ago
Excellent Poem
Candlewitch
15 years 10 months ago
Dear Faith
shirley harrison
15 years 10 months ago
Letting go!
Candlewitch
15 years 10 months ago
Dear Shirley
Seren
15 years 10 months ago
Dearest Cat
Candlewitch
15 years 10 months ago
Dearest Jayne
lou
15 years 10 months ago
Cat
Candlewitch
15 years 10 months ago
Thank you Lou
R.M.Shanmugam
15 years 10 months ago
fabulous, sweetly worded,
Candlewitch
15 years 10 months ago
Dear Shan
xena465
15 years 10 months ago
Beautiful Cat
Candlewitch
15 years 10 months ago
Dear Xena
DawningDaytripper
15 years 10 months ago
I loved you usages and flow