Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

WIND FROM MY SAILS

  "WIND FROM MY SAILS"  Margaret Ann Waddicor 11th july 2010

 

Something has stolen the wind from my sails

becalmed and still I sit, 

stunned into silence

by sudden clouds, 

shading the sun from my face,

 

my sight becomes dimmed, 

my mind in a spin, 

but no shooting stars, 

not concussion, 

much worse, maybe not, 

as I focus on near things, 

tack this way and that, 

 

in mind but I find I'm still here in this place

at least for a while, 

given grace, 

then after its all in the past, 

new thermals can fill me again

those sails, 

life's good rythmns in health

take the helm 

and replenish myself,

 

the figurehead of future development

life, 

so take stock and be wise,

take the view that a pause 

is a good thing

a change, 

it may even lead you to wonderful things, 

who knows?


 


— Nordic cloud, Jul 15, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

More from this author

Critiques

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 10 months ago

Dear Ann

A wonderful thought expressed in your poem. My favorite lines are: in mind but I find I’m still here in this place at least for a while, given grace, then after its all in the past, new thermals can fill me again those sails, life’s good rythmns in health take the helm and replenish myself, Always, Cat
R

raj

15 years 10 months ago

Dear Ann

reading your enlightening words gave me a feeling of reclining in an easy chair and absorbing the significance of "Pause"... an excellent meaningful write ... warmly...raj (sublime_ocean)...
L

Lonnie

15 years 10 months ago

Heartfelt and heartwarming!

You have touched upon some strong points of life here, Ann, and shown them to be mere wisps of a more solid and vaster existence! Lovely, lovely work!
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

15 years 10 months ago

Hello Ann

What a clever idea to talk of the lulls in the tempestuous sea of life. Nicely executed! regards Boni
SH

shirley harrison

15 years 10 months ago

The wind in Your Sails

Dearest Ann, A beautifully written piece! i see your Heart! with so much love and envy of your courage,shirl.... shirley harrison
Seren

Seren

15 years 10 months ago

Dearest Friend

I can only sigh and remember ...it was getting sick that renewed me ... facing ones demise or potential demise has a way of forcing you back into living in some way ... I do it through my words to other worlds ;) love and biggest hugs to the softest northern light casting her love to embrace all JayCee x x x P.S I was so taken with the thoughts your poem brought up that I forgot to lol Applause :) love you (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)