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Jul 15, 2010
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WIND FROM MY SAILS
"WIND FROM MY SAILS" Margaret Ann Waddicor 11th july 2010
Something has stolen the wind from my sails
becalmed and still I sit,
stunned into silence
by sudden clouds,
shading the sun from my face,
my sight becomes dimmed,
my mind in a spin,
but no shooting stars,
not concussion,
much worse, maybe not,
as I focus on near things,
tack this way and that,
in mind but I find I'm still here in this place
at least for a while,
given grace,
then after its all in the past,
new thermals can fill me again
those sails,
life's good rythmns in health
take the helm
and replenish myself,
the figurehead of future development
life,
so take stock and be wise,
take the view that a pause
is a good thing
a change,
it may even lead you to wonderful things,
who knows?
— Nordic cloud, Jul 15, 2010
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Candlewitch
16 years ago
Dear Ann
raj
16 years ago
Dear Ann
Lonnie
16 years ago
Heartfelt and heartwarming!
Bonitaj
16 years ago
Hello Ann
shirley harrison
16 years ago
The wind in Your Sails
Seren
16 years ago
Dearest Friend
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
Oh thank you thank you all.
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