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escape

there's always an escape to make
the stuck door and lost handle passed
through the light windows of amber
thoughts held in a slow syrup of sun, why
encased in life's spills
the sweep in the corner, and a poem
folded in the dust
the slow leaf in the short summer, lost
in the occupation of counting toes
one too many and not enough, each silence
crushed out and smashed
against the mind's cold war
shattering on the walls,
a fragrant echo dying
coming back to a milkweed flower
one day flying





— Orphani, Jul 15, 2010

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Seren

Seren

15 years 10 months ago

Dear B

I thought the whole poem was brilliant hun ... but the ending left me hanging like it was unfinished but maybe that was your intent ? love and hugs JayCee (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
Kailashana

Kailashana

15 years 10 months ago

As I am disallowed from

As I am disallowed from voting, I can only say THIS is the poetry you were born to write. A thought here, a slice of reality there, a feeling and a vision... Undying love, Anna p.s. "There is a kind of mysticism to writing." ~ Irvine Welsh