Cry

Cry

Cry me a river
tell me a lie
Make it a good one
something I'll buy

Tell me of demons
speak of your ills
Tell me your hell
if not for the pills

Cry me a river
let it all flow
Straight from the heart
not for the show

Tell me of family
ask me of mine
Pretend that you care
use old standard lines

Cry me a river
tug my heart strings
Write me a song
that everyone sings

Like the pied piper
lead others astray
I can see through you
the price I won't pay

Cry me a river
I won't shed a tear
Hide in your shadows
cloaked in your fear

Again I am bloodied
refusing to die....
Cry me a river
then say goodbye.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SMwXPueu-RM

— jetz, Jul 15, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: South eastern Connecticut, USA

Critiques

scribbler

16 years ago

cry

Secret of success is sincerity.Once you can fake that you've got it made.Stated much better in your write.......scribbler

jetz

16 years ago

Hi Scribbler, Once again, you have pulled one of my poems from the 'lonely' bin. Thanks. In all honesty, I didn't expect a response on this. I think it is something all can relate to but few like to admit. We've all been fooled. This served it's purpose. It gave me a release once I saw it in black and white. Sue

Seren

16 years ago

Dearest Sue

Fooled I have been ... sometimes you think you know someone and them boom this other person appears that you've never met before great poem the rhythm and rhyme are sublime well done hun spot on tell Patrick I miss his little poems love JayCee x x x (“To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.” ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson quote)

jetz

16 years ago

Hi Seren, I’m sorry you

Hi Seren, I'm sorry you can relate, but then, who can't. Thanks for responding. I'll pass the message on to Patrick... mind if I omit the word "little?" For some damn reason, he doesn't like it.. or maybe it's the pointing.. hugs, Sue

magics02

16 years ago

Really nice one here Jetz

Beautiful poetry at its best here Sue and missed you just the same. I love the wording here you used and the flow was superb. You did a really great job and I wanted to tell you so. And I read it as it could be a worthy song here. For sure Miss ya and love at ya Connecticut gal to me worthy for a nom and the stars for you Mona Magics x0x00x0x

jetz

16 years ago

Hey Magic, Thanks for

Hey Magic, Thanks for reading me...much appreciated! Sue

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