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Jul 15, 2010
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Visible Problems, Hidden Solutions
Drop your problems beneath the seaThe sharks will never devourBury them under the sycamore treeLike zombies they’re back and more sour This wounded ocean is bleeding oilYour anchor of dreams is destroyedAttempts on fixing this, left in turmoilThey’re lost in his lies, men deployed He’s painted pictures of life in his mindWith promises Jordan can’t jumpOh ideal portrait, will we ever find?Can we ever get over this hump? There’s fluctuation still happening nowIf I’m right, that was something he’d fixIt’s a rollercoaster of stock and the dowFinancially, we’re hurling sticks
— Lil Z, Jul 15, 2010
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greeneyes
15 years 10 months ago
Damn Boy!
Lil Z
15 years 10 months ago
Thanks very much Green Eyes!
xena465
15 years 10 months ago
Wow Lil
Lil Z
15 years 10 months ago
Thank you Xena!
scribbler
15 years 10 months ago
problems
Lil Z
15 years 10 months ago
Thank you very much Scribbler!
Candlewitch
15 years 10 months ago
Hello Lil z
Lil Z
15 years 10 months ago
Thank you Cat!
magics02
15 years 10 months ago
Lil Z
Lil Z
15 years 10 months ago
Thanks Mona!
magics02
15 years 10 months ago
Okay let and give me some ideas