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An Aching of Ages

An Aching of Ages

How can children in metal leg braces,
look up to adults with cut and shut faces.
What of this thing called human dignity,
we’re to busy massaging our soul or vanity. 

When we've spent half as much on their pain.
perhaps we’ll find courage and explain.
Why we think just by turning a cheque page,
and golly we’ll find ourselves young of age.

Spires built on churches so grand,
we’re all there hoping he’ll understand.
Why the children are left at the gate,
this is another time they’ll have to wait.
 
If he’s handing out a miracle cure,
then maybe he’ll fix our ? my allure.
After all he’s no scrap metal dealer,
get the children a little three wheeler.

He won’t take the steel from a child’s leg,
he’s much happier with cripples that beg.
And of coarse in the adults he’ll find,
more interesting cases of a troubled mind. 

Should he not take care of mind or face, 
well he’ll start an extraordinary race.
To the surgeon of plastic or brain,
then just watch the bank balance drain.

And the children they’ll just have to cope,
after all the adults are so full of dope @ hope.
That the MD’s of great minds and saggy jowls,
will one day find a cure for shrinking towels.

More importantly the doctors may invent,
a cure for the bank balance’s big dent.
“But of course it is money well spent”
great face and skin as tight as our tent,
that we’re in through non payment of rent.
— Roscoe Lane, Jul 14, 2010

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Region, Country: Scotland, Ayrshire land of Burns.., GBR

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xena465

xena465

15 years 10 months ago

Gee Roscoe...

Very strong and I love it. I came from a family of nine, 5 brothers and 3 sisters. My youngest brother and sister wore callipers on their legs in the early 1960’s due to lack of calcium. Not that they starved, but we mostly lived on food that filled our bellies rather than nutritional food, which was too expensive in those days, plus we know more about nutrition these days. Also a lot of our food now-a-days has added ingredients to prevent this. In poor countries it still happens, but it should never ever happen in our rich countries. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
faithmairee

faithmairee

15 years 10 months ago

Sad Words But Very True Ones

Dear Roscoe-I agree that this poem is strong. Very sad but true what you say. Love-Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~