hobo

Jul 14, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Unto the very end

We see things in each other
things that others don't care to see
not that they couldn't see
just that they don't care to see

we listen to each other
about things that others don't care to listen to
not that they couldn't listen
just that they don't care to listen

we say things to each other
things that others don't care to say
not that they couldn't say the same things
just that they don't care to say the same things

the truth is we fill gaps and holes
in each others soul

are we lovers
oh no we are not lovers
but we do love each other

are we friends
oh yes we are friends
we are friends

unto the very end

— hobo, Jul 14, 2010

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hobo

16 years ago

as always

as always if you are the kind of person who when they make friends they make friends unto the very end. then this poem is for you. Of course if you want to be lovers I will try and work something out haha hobo *You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down*

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Randy

I am not a bad mate to have in your corner and I count you a friend anyway :) lol loved your poem I am still giggling at your comment above though sorry lmao ~! four in the morning here im sleep deprived lol love and big hugs JayCee x x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)

hobo

16 years ago

lol

thank you my friend, and you are my friend indeed :) I am glad that I gave you a good giggle hahahaha *You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down*

shirley harrison

16 years ago

you are cupid!

You are Cupid,however your bow is just for you!and the beauty you find day to day! L:O:L You my dear Randy , you Have a style like no other for melting the inner being of a woman! if your looking for a lover i'll give you my mother! L:O:L Just teasing! love you Hobo The Great! shirley harrison

hobo

16 years ago

I am glad you like my style

I am glad you like my style my friend and ahh does your mother look anything like you hahaha :) sorry I just can't help myself *You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down*

shirley harrison

16 years ago

L:O:L always with you

my mum looks like me yes! shirley harrison

hobo

16 years ago

oh my gosh

oh my gosh I love both of you then hahahha *You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down*

lou

16 years ago

Behave

Carry on writing Lou xx

hobo

16 years ago

lol

lol you may be right *You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down*

xena465

16 years ago

Cheeky Hobo Tut tut

10 out of 10 for your poem and 10 + for your naughty comment. Tee he, he. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

faithmairee

16 years ago

Just Lovely

Just lovely, Hobo. Five stars for a wonderful poem on friendship! ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

scribbler

16 years ago

friends

hobo,I think it best we just be friends lol!what a fine work on platonic friendship....scribbler

magics02

16 years ago

Hobo friend

You just keep spitting them out I see. I like this part of you and I like the humorous part of you too, for when we take each other and ourselves too seriously is when we land in a cheeky pit of sh.... Lauging out loud Helloooooo over there Hobo, it's time to come out of that cave and behave. Supper is ready...:) Love at ya guy Mona xoxox

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