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— Esker, Jul 14, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

Favorite Poets: Klo , .., Ida, .., Rhiannon1010, .., Pleiades, .., Valryianne, .., Ester, .., Stephanie, .., Emina Smajevic, ..., Elefentee, ..., Sommer Lyn, ..., Jasmine, ..., Rula, ...

Critiques

raskin

16 years ago

Dang, I was too slow. I was

Dang, I was too slow. I was going to read your poem next but I guess I was too slow. I look forward to the words you put together and what images you come up with. raskin

pleiades

16 years ago

missed it…darni liked the

missed it...darn i liked the dark

Esker

16 years ago

Like the dark You voice of reason

and so I like you understanding and depth having searched and having found the precious jewels of intimacy and trust Pleaides the fair and delightful I bow down to you and shall continue to write Ever Yours Your Esker~

Tonya Greenlee

16 years ago

See Esker

Even though we don't always leave a comment, We read and absorb your words. hugs friend, Tonya

Esker

16 years ago

Dearest Esker

Orgami here I have watched you grow moulted in your skin your crawled from damp chysallis and unfurled those visionary colours hatched from the brood until careful jaws and howled at the fresh moons craved in nocturne skies you have sharpened your claws and tested your teeth How it is to walk in the shadow of you and linger like smoke after the ash tip tumbles to follow you through the delay of dayfall sketching in where you turn your head what draws your draw you are such a clever one I am so endeared to you we shall meet again im certian a certian "hood" was certian my brother my self halve Until Again.............................................................. Your Orgami

Tonya Greenlee

16 years ago

explaination was not necessary...

but nice. Are thee born again Twin of thy other side What do you feel is gone; Has changed, Thee are still thyself Thy mind as sharp Thy vision as vivid Thy color swirls With exquisiteness Thy words still spill Over Like Waterfalls From clear and fresh Ideas that crest the lip To tumbling rushes that Sweep the mind; to Currents that roil with Chaos below the surface Esker, Orgami thee both Blend to one; unique You are my friend. Always, Tonya

scribbler

16 years ago

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I know I'm always telling people less is more but come on......scribbler lol

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