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Jul 13, 2010
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Melisenda (Part 2)
She is the empress of the four gales
a witch among her people
she has a gem that turns stone to water
she draws wisdom from a snake
that twists through time
she raises a finger
and a city is a desert
winks and it is a bustling metropolis
she has killed for love
stomach swelled for love
she seeks her beloved in the night
and is not evil...
a witch among her people
she has a gem that turns stone to water
she draws wisdom from a snake
that twists through time
she raises a finger
and a city is a desert
winks and it is a bustling metropolis
she has killed for love
stomach swelled for love
she seeks her beloved in the night
and is not evil...
— Dalton, Jul 13, 2010
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years ago
Melisenda… another name
Ravenshakti
16 years ago
Reminds me of Melusine de Lusignan...
Dalton
16 years ago
Thankyou indeed Raven, the
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