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SYLVAN SECRETS

I just talked to an old Ent
   whose limbs were all mossy and bent
   he said his many friends with leaf
   had personalities beyond belief

Told me that the rustling leaves
   and gently sighing wind
   is how  gossip, he receives
   which I'll now pass to you my friend

Cypress trees are sage and solemn
   so quiet in their  marsh
   they almost look a lot like Gollum
   with knees knobby and harsh

Of course a weeping willows sad
   with sorry hanging boughs
   if you've a picture of one glad
   I'd surely like to browse

Sweet gum trees have lots of fun
   they always have a ball
   you know the partys just begun
   when gumballs drop in Fall

All cedars are evergreen
   a truly jealous tree
   as envious as any seen
   the forests all agree

What should I say about "fruit" trees
   who tend toward being 'sweet"
   limp branches yield to any breeze
   they're okay when discreet

Pecan trees have little sense
   most people say they're nuts
   with lumber that is kind of dense
   of jokes they are oft' butts

Cottonwood's so soft and fit
   like favorite well worn shirt
   upon hill sides sunny and lit
   roots in rich but stony dirt

All the pine trees are so proud
   they stand so straight and tall
   but by ice they're easily cowed
   and often made to fall

Redwoods are stuck up,aloof
   looking down upon the others
   I guess that they are living proof
   of  conceit among all brothers

Maple tree relationships
   are often as not tricky
   if perchance the wrong word slips
   thing can become right sticky

Then there's the common old oak tree
   whose great strength is known to all
   and I think that all agree
   it dresses well in fall

As you walk through any woods
   each tree has its own trait
   all willing to display their goods
   if like Ents you'll just slow  your gait
— scribbler, Jul 13, 2010

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Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Wow Stan

I've seen Lord of the rings and loved it. At first I wasn't sure about some of your write, but after reading it through it's just fabulous. Full of all the tales of the trees and the fantasy of the brilliant trilogy. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

sylvan

Thank you for the kind comments.I was worried that reference to "Ents" was too obscure......Stan
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poewriter58

15 years 11 months ago

Stan

This was an absolute joy to read. The thought that went into each tree's personality terrific Chrys
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

sylvan

Along with above stated concerns,I had also wondered if it was a bit long.Glad that you enjoyed this long work........scribbler
faithmairee

faithmairee

15 years 11 months ago

Just Wonderful

This is just wonderful. I love it. I read it all of the way through and I'm not big on long poems. BUT your poem kept my interest and it seems it had to be that long to get in all of the stuff about the trees. Love-Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

lol

it was so long I had to leave out a few trees.thank you for the read and time to comment.....scribbler
LZ

Lil Z

15 years 11 months ago

Nice one!

A brilliant little story of the many trees in this world! Nicely done!
SH

shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

Well Stan Just Wonderful!

so i am very allergic to the cypress and as we have so many here in Chianti,i suffer alot we also have the pine,which is where the "Pesto" comes from The old oak tree has for me a sence of Loyalty,you can always trust an oak! how wonderful you put these beautiful poems together! with much love shirley harrison
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

sylvan

I think about everyone is at least a bit allergic to at least 1 tree pollen.Good of you to visit.......Stan
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Stan

I am getting less late lol ... I love the story of the Ent's and I always love them in the Lord of the Rings loved it love and big hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

sylvan

with added responsibilities come less time.Glad to hear from you at any time....scribbler