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"NIGHT YOU....."
Soft silent night your sighs sough with the breeze,
your wisdom smiles through fathoms, miles, mist,
personifies the dust of years,
sings melodies with springs,
roams the loam
of centuries,
its messages in time,
sticks the sense of place,
and winds the spirit in
on spindles dark,
with silver flashing sheen,
cloaked secrecy,
blurred visions,
fission, fires,
indigo and murky black,
with planets spun from flares,
deep reaching fingered shadowed strips
of rib-boned dreams,
that tie our consciousness in knots and bows,
set rattles, rustles,
rumblings adrift,
ghost patterned spectres,
floating penetrating barriers,
stretched, severed, seared
in cadences, strung,
from here to there
to nowhere sinking, slinking, sly,
mysterious, mother of slumbers,
you watch us live and die.
Critiques
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
Dearest Ann
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dearest Ann
Geezer
15 years 11 months ago
A wonderful trip...
Nordic cloud
15 years 10 months ago
Oh Gee Sir Gee!
loved
15 years 10 months ago
marvellous words