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"NIGHT YOU....."

  "NIGHT YOU...." Margaret Ann Waddicor July 2010.

 

Soft silent night your sighs sough with the breeze,

your wisdom smiles through fathoms, miles, mist,

personifies the dust of years, 

sings melodies with springs, 

roams the loam 

of centuries,

its messages in time, 

 

sticks the sense of place, 

and winds the spirit in 

on spindles dark, 

with silver flashing sheen,

cloaked secrecy, 

blurred visions, 

fission, fires, 

 

indigo and murky black, 

with planets spun from flares,

deep reaching fingered shadowed strips 

of rib-boned dreams,

that tie our consciousness in knots and bows,

set rattles, rustles, 

rumblings adrift,

 

ghost patterned spectres,

floating penetrating barriers,

stretched, severed, seared 

in cadences, strung,

from here to there 

to nowhere sinking, slinking, sly,

mysterious, mother of slumbers, 

you watch us live and die.


— Nordic cloud, Jul 13, 2010

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

Dearest Ann

i loved this night all, how wonderful you write, the first stanza was my favourite but i loved it all a star that shines may never fall,thats you and an endless twinkle of passion! with much love always shirl... shirley harrison
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dearest Ann

this is just a big Sigh ... sighhhhh love and biggest hugs JayCee (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
Geezer

Geezer

15 years 11 months ago

A wonderful trip...

amid the universe of stars. How big are our dreams, how small, but signifigant are we? The lives we touch, is the measure of our greatness. You m'Lady, have touched me deeply, and my universe is the larger for it. ~ Sir Gee
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

15 years 10 months ago

Oh Gee Sir Gee!

Ann of Norway Your comment touches me too, and I hope that I always send you vibes of positive thoughts as you deserve them my GOOD friend, love from your queenie with the dinted crown. Ann. Thank you the others who have commented, "Loved" thank you too, and for enjoying my words that's always so lovely to know. Love you all Ann.
loved

loved

15 years 10 months ago

marvellous words

ghost patterned spectres, floating penetrating barriers, stretched, severed, seared in cadences, strung, from here to there to nowhere sinking, slinking, sly, mysterious, mother of slumbers, you watch us live and die.