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Jul 13, 2010
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travels with myself (and no one else) 1
Manhattan
early summer, late evening
the east village, St. Marks place
double espresso, no cream
he was very wealthy
yet un employed
surrounded by humanity
still all alone
famous
but never recognized
a life like an epic novel
with plot twists and turns
and page turning interest
the chapters were intense
but never in order
he sat in the corner
tapping at a laptop
then stretched his arms
above a hairless head
to endorse a description
and compare a decision
Brooklyn, Park Slope
Flatbush and Decatur
Antonios pizza,one slice
a stroll to the subway
the Q train to herald square
two blocks from Penn station
on the train
at the laptop again
stand clear of the closing doors
the seven thirty nine
tickets please
the verse ends here
but the story begins
the final stop
on the North Jersey coastline.......
early summer, late evening
the east village, St. Marks place
double espresso, no cream
he was very wealthy
yet un employed
surrounded by humanity
still all alone
famous
but never recognized
a life like an epic novel
with plot twists and turns
and page turning interest
the chapters were intense
but never in order
he sat in the corner
tapping at a laptop
then stretched his arms
above a hairless head
to endorse a description
and compare a decision
Brooklyn, Park Slope
Flatbush and Decatur
Antonios pizza,one slice
a stroll to the subway
the Q train to herald square
two blocks from Penn station
on the train
at the laptop again
stand clear of the closing doors
the seven thirty nine
tickets please
the verse ends here
but the story begins
the final stop
on the North Jersey coastline.......
— nomad collapse, Jul 13, 2010
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xena465
16 years ago
Welcome to Neo Nomad
nomad collapse
16 years ago
all that will be done for
xena465
16 years ago
Dear Nomad
nomad collapse
16 years ago
i tried your suggestion with
xena465
16 years ago
Hi Nomad
nomad collapse
16 years ago
OK i took a second look and
xena465
16 years ago
Oh dear sorry...
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