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Jul 13, 2010
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Say it in whispers
Say it in whispers
Say it in whispers
I am flying to the east
None shall know
Where to,
I shall to the distant continents
Go by myself,
To fathom the depths of the ocean
And
Distance
Let me fly to
China or Japan
Where ever solace discover I can
And
In the wee while that I am gone away,
Within my memory do stay
And
Recall my love every day,
But say it in whispers,
If you may,
I am going to steal your hearts away
As long as from the west
I stay en-rapt,
In a melody of word
As an array of sounds
And in my solace comfort I’ve found.
Say it slowly once again
But say it in whispers
In whispers
In whispers
Again and again...
Lovelylovedlyhoneyvisionary
— loved, Jul 13, 2010
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xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Whispers
loved
15 years 11 months ago
wow thanks
Candlewitch
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Loved
loved
15 years 11 months ago
thanks a lot
raj
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Loved
loved
15 years 11 months ago
ur
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
I'm whispering!
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
whispers
loved
15 years 11 months ago
Grateful thanks
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
oops
magics02
15 years 11 months ago
Nice one Istan
loved
15 years 11 months ago
ur smile
faithmairee
15 years 11 months ago
Just lovely
loved
15 years 11 months ago
YOU ALL
lou
15 years 11 months ago
Loved
loved
15 years 11 months ago
thanks to uuuuuuuuu
greeneyes
15 years 11 months ago
wow!
loved
15 years 11 months ago
wow
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Lovedly Loved
loved
15 years 11 months ago
do change whatever
Lil Z
15 years 10 months ago
I love this!
loved
15 years 10 months ago
thanks for ur
loved
15 years 10 months ago
my friends have
loved
15 years 10 months ago
where have all
loved
15 years 10 months ago
where have all