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Jul 13, 2010
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Say it in whispers
Say it in whispers
Say it in whispers
I am flying to the east
None shall know
Where to,
I shall to the distant continents
Go by myself,
To fathom the depths of the ocean
And
Distance
Let me fly to
China or Japan
Where ever solace discover I can
And
In the wee while that I am gone away,
Within my memory do stay
And
Recall my love every day,
But say it in whispers,
If you may,
I am going to steal your hearts away
As long as from the west
I stay en-rapt,
In a melody of word
As an array of sounds
And in my solace comfort I’ve found.
Say it slowly once again
But say it in whispers
In whispers
In whispers
Again and again...
Lovelylovedlyhoneyvisionary
— loved, Jul 13, 2010
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xena465
16 years ago
Whispers
loved
16 years ago
wow thanks
Candlewitch
16 years ago
Dear Loved
loved
16 years ago
thanks a lot
raj
16 years ago
Dear Loved
loved
16 years ago
ur
shirley harrison
16 years ago
I'm whispering!
scribbler
16 years ago
whispers
loved
16 years ago
Grateful thanks
scribbler
16 years ago
oops
magics02
16 years ago
Nice one Istan
loved
16 years ago
ur smile
faithmairee
16 years ago
Just lovely
loved
16 years ago
YOU ALL
lou
16 years ago
Loved
loved
16 years ago
thanks to uuuuuuuuu
greeneyes
16 years ago
wow!
loved
16 years ago
wow
Seren
16 years ago
Lovedly Loved
loved
16 years ago
do change whatever
Lil Z
16 years ago
I love this!
loved
16 years ago
thanks for ur
loved
16 years ago
my friends have
loved
16 years ago
where have all
loved
16 years ago
where have all
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