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Say it in whispers

Say it in whispers

Say it in whispers

I am flying to the east

None shall know

Where to,

 

I shall to the distant continents

Go by myself,

To fathom the depths of the ocean

And

Distance

Let me fly to

China or Japan

Where ever solace discover I can

And 
In the wee while that I am gone away,

Within my memory do stay

And

Recall my love every day,

But say it in whispers,
If you may,

I am going to steal your hearts away

As long as from the west

I stay en-rapt,

In a melody of word

As an array of sounds

And in my solace comfort I’ve found.

Say it slowly once again

But say it in whispers

In whispers

In whispers

Again and again...
 
Lovelylovedlyhoneyvisionary

 

— loved, Jul 13, 2010

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xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Whispers

Beautiful write Loved... "I shall to the distant continents All by myself, To fathom the depths of the ocean" Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

wow thanks

a five starer poem glad u loved it too and so much thanks
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Loved

This is very lovely. In this line, Let me fly to c Is (c) a typo? My favorite lines are: And in my solace comfort I’ve found. Say it slowly once again But say it in whispers In whispers In whispers Again and again… Always, Cat
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

thanks a lot

the c was for China but now removed thanks for ur keen observation and high rating of my poem
R

raj

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Loved

Ahhh!! what a lovely escapade and a love title too!!...i loved it... warmly ...raj (sublime_ocean)
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

ur

so sublime its gladness that overwhelms me when i learn poets like you comfort me. thanks to uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
SH

shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

I'm whispering!

Come to Europe i will have open Armes for you my loved! Stunning piece of poetry you get more special every day! SSSSHHhhhhh with love to my delightful loved! shirley harrison
S

scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

whispers

I doubt you need implore anyone not to forget you.Only change I'd make in this hopeful write: line 6,change "all"to"go" for clarity.very enjoyable read....scribbler
S

scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

oops

put comment at wrong place AND forgot stars LOL
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

ur smile

makes my day every time i reach out for uuuuuuuuu ur lovely and kind comment mona i thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu22222222222222222222222222222222222
faithmairee

faithmairee

15 years 11 months ago

Just lovely

Nice work, Loved...and five stars from me whisperingggggg j u s t l o v e l y, l o v e d!!!!!!!! Love-Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

YOU ALL

Overwhelm me as u shower stars so freely i do hope i really desrve these thanks any way u all r my mentors today.
lou

lou

15 years 11 months ago

Loved

A gorgeous poem , you get better every day. Lou xx
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

wow

somehow ur green eyes i do admire send me a wire of congrats the poem has made it to spot light coz of ur eyes
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Lovedly Loved

I am late but lovely poem it could still do with a small tidy up with the format but other than that I cannot see much I would change well done Loved love and big hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

do change whatever

thanks u may change as u please as long as you have spot lighted it
LZ

Lil Z

15 years 10 months ago

I love this!

You're a wonder, and again, you have a magnificant style!
loved

loved

15 years 10 months ago

my friends have

given me the requisite support so i remain indebted to one and all but where have all my male friends gone in search or hunt of...
loved

loved

15 years 10 months ago

where have all

my critiques gone??? gone with the wind perhaps into the deserts of eternity never again to be.... to be.... to be
loved

loved

15 years 10 months ago

where have all

my critiques gone??? gone with the wind perhaps into the deserts of eternity never again to be.... to be.... to be