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when I went to see the elephant

when I went to see the elephant

 

when I went to see the elephant,

brown-grey elephant,

what did the elephant say?

 

of beetles and grasses we did converse

of leopards and lions,

giraffes gave us verse.

 

I asked the elephant,

“are you close to the earth?”

elephant looked

with a wise old glance,

one tear from its eye

dropped to dust

it moved a foot an inch.

 

when I went to see the elephant,

brown-grey elephant,

touched its long nose, quietly,

next to its wrinkled skin,

listened to its breathing

I heard

magic singing,

 

I asked the elephant, “are you close

to the earth?”

 

the elephant swayed from side to side

took a step, gave me a ride,

gently bent its knees and allowed

me to mount,

between its proud ears.

 

“earth,” spoke the elephant,

then the elephant was still,

not a word from its mouth was heard.

 

elephant went gliding

on effortless round feet,

with its eyes

showed me thickets and plains,

water and sky,

why the tear dropped from its eye.

 

“time was,” the elephant finally said,

“I could walk for years, from

morning to bed.  only tick birds

for company, ticks as well.

 

rain, wind, light, and sky were

new and free. 

now, my friend,

it is different, as well you see. 

from years gone by

I have walked and watched, listened

to changes on earth.

years gone by a

weary road,

good road, until recent

 

past when humans came for my

ivory beauty, liquid blackness from

under your feet and mine-

 

messages I hear from the ground.

why are you humans still around?

 

it was once so peaceful, before you

showed up, days were brilliant and

kind. 

 

long days, not a sound but birds,

crickets, new leaves growing, nest building,

birthing of new life everywhere.  now look,

human, look what is left--dust, my good sir,

dust; at least dust was once clean.”

 

I went to see the elephant,

brown-grey elephant,

sadness was all around.

 

forever gone, life it once knew,

buried in the ground.  once master,

master

of all it surveyed, numbered years

have passed,

in rain, wind and quiet,

always gentle, always kind,

elephant

thought it would last.

 

elephant now lives looking over

its shoulder,

for human usurpers

of peace--everywhere, they are

everywhere, turning the world to

grease.

 

“why,” asked the elephant, “do

humans act as they must?”

I had no answer,

all I could do was cry,

our tears mingled

in the dust.

 

vcp


— Victorclaude, Jul 13, 2010

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Country/Region: USA

Favorite Poets: Wallace Stevens, D. H. Lawrence, Charles Bukowski, Bob Dylan, Leonard Cohen, Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, Percy Bysshe Shelley, T. S. Eliot, E. E. Cummings, Emily Dickinson, William Butler Yeats, Pablo Neruda, Joni Mitchell, William Shakespeare, Basho, Elizabeth Barrett Browning, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Kelly Marie Hayner, Susan Wydville. D. Phillip Caron, Elizabeth Bishop.

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Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Victor

so good to have you here at Neo with us loved your first post will give it a thorough crit in the morning lol well later in the morning its nearly 5am lol Love and hugs JayCee (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Welcome to Neo Victor

I gather from this fabulous write that you love elephants. And I’m with you all the way. They live for such a long time and have existed long before the modern interfering human race that mistreats and misunderstands them, so I’m not surprised that the elephant didn’t want to say too much. Just one thing, like JayCee was probably thinking; it needs a little revision to tighten it so as to make it a little shorter. It would make it so much easier to read. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
Victorclaude

Victorclaude

15 years 11 months ago

Thank you, Xena

I edited this piece for neary a year, and shortened it several times to its present length. I honestly don't know what I could now remove from it, but I don't mind reading longer pieces. Thanks for you thoughts. Victor
Kailashana

Kailashana

15 years 11 months ago

Hey you! Welcome back. You

Hey you! Welcome back. You are a sight for sore dusty grey eyes. Light, Anna "There is a kind of mysticism to writing." ~ Irvine Welsh
Victorclaude

Victorclaude

15 years 11 months ago

Hello, Anna

Well, as I live and breathe, here you are! What's been happening? Much has recently happened to me! [email protected]. Don't really want to discuss it here. Ciao, Victor