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Jul 13, 2010
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Jettison the Bull Shit
I'm sick of silly games
i don't want jealousy
and the bravado we display
I just want to love and to be loved in return
Don't care what people say
or think, anymore
let freedom lead the way
Jettison the bull shit,
no more for me today, let it go i say
don't come back another day
I just want to love and be loved in return
We were not put on this planet
to suffer I say , so why not leave
that baggage at the door
I just want to love and to be loved in return
i don't want jealousy
and the bravado we display
I just want to love and to be loved in return
Don't care what people say
or think, anymore
let freedom lead the way
Jettison the bull shit,
no more for me today, let it go i say
don't come back another day
I just want to love and be loved in return
We were not put on this planet
to suffer I say , so why not leave
that baggage at the door
I just want to love and to be loved in return
— lou, Jul 13, 2010
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shirley harrison
16 years ago
Dear Lou
lou
16 years ago
Dear Shirley
hobo
16 years ago
very nice work my friend
lou
16 years ago
Randy
scribbler
16 years ago
bull
lou
16 years ago
Stan
magics02
16 years ago
You go tell them gal
lou
16 years ago
thank you
DawningDaytripper
16 years ago
This is a great, cut
Geezer
16 years ago
Nothing like...
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