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lou
lou
Jul 13, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Jettison the Bull Shit

I'm sick of silly games
i don't want jealousy
and the bravado we display

I just want to love and to be loved in return

Don't care what people say
or think, anymore
let freedom lead the way

Jettison the  bull shit,
no more for me today, let it go i say
don't come back another day

I just want to love and be loved in return

We were not put on this planet
to suffer I say , so why  not leave
that baggage at the door

I just want to love and to  be loved in return


— lou, Jul 13, 2010

About This Poem

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Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

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shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Lou

very well said, somethings just cost nothing, and love is one of them! with much love shirl.... shirley harrison
hobo

hobo

15 years 11 months ago

very nice work my friend

This is very nice work my beautiful friend, leave everything at the door. nice write nice read *You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down*
lou

lou

15 years 11 months ago

Randy

Why thank you mr romance much love lou xx
S

scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

bull

compared to the desire to be loved,all else IS bullshit.......scribbler
lou

lou

15 years 11 months ago

Stan

Thanks lou xx
M

magics02

15 years 11 months ago

You go tell them gal

I had a smile on this one and I say Shout it to the mountains Lou. This is a good stress reliever poem.LOL Love at ya gal Mona Good job
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

15 years 11 months ago

This is a great, cut

This is a great, cut throught the tape write Lou, loved it. You did miss a "to" in your last line, it reads a little funny with out it, but very good! Very contected Julie D.D. Hello all, come and join us in Live chat! Meet n' greet, Neo night, lonely poems, teen night. We have something for everyone, come and meet your community!
Geezer

Geezer

15 years 10 months ago

Nothing like...

emptying out the bull-shit! It makes our baggage lighter. Maybe change the line: don't come back another day] to something like: send the baggage on it's way? I don't know, it just seems that line is a little unwieldy. Loved the sentiment though! ~ Gee xx