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Fateful, two thoughts

 NR. "FORCED PURGATORY"Ann 7th July 2010.

 

I am to have Star Wars treatment,

placed in bondage in my space, 

laced and strapped and branded, 

ready for initiation fires

to permeate my skin, purge my sin, 

 

enter in to places undesired, 

exercise the halls that have inspired, 

pacify the devils now within, 

banish, excommunicate their whim,

starve them, beat them, flail them, shrivel them,

send them packing fast, 

 

save the rest a cavernous shell,

glean the remnants of my soul, 

change the negative into positive flow, 

a strange enlightenment method, 

so brutal, so brave, transformed, 

perhaps deformed and changed.

 

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 "THE MEANING OF DIVINE" Ann July 5th 2010.

 

Devout yet not, what's it about,

we live, we do our best in east and west, 

in north and south, show a smile, grimace, 

 

stake our sense of place and plant, 

grow taller, feeling smaller as we do, 

learning, failing, gaining knowledge, understanding

 

as we go from phase to phase of life its pattern, 

dance and cry, laugh and sing, always on alert,

for hurting, hurting others brothers lovers, 

 

all visit the mill, the will of your desires their fires,

once lit burn on if you regret you wail, if not, 

perhaps you got it right by chance, we melt

 

our challenges drudge and disappointments, 

fail to catch the essence of the joy that lies there waiting, 

use its inspiration, fuel for love and grace, 

 

even in our commonplace existence shines, 

the happiness of the meaning of divine.

 

 
— Nordic cloud, Jul 12, 2010

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Tonya

Tonya

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Ann

Two very good poems, filled with passion and trepidation My thoughts and well wishes are with you, especially after reading “Forced Purgatory” It must seem like that, I am glad it is available to do all the things you described in such a well descriptive way. I could never picture you as a shell, you hold so many wonderful thoughts. Keep your positives flowing! Hugs from me every day! You’re second poem: Contemplating our existence and things we have done and been through. I think is only natural. We know there maybe things we might like to have done better, but theres lots of things we do get right. We may hurt others at times, I think the ones we love the most are the easiest for us to hurt. Theres a lot of love there too….. (I think I am rambling, my heart is heavy right now, but is with you too) Always, Tonya
xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Dearest Ann

Tonya said it all. Your descriptions are wonderful, artistic and just marvellous. My love and heart is with you too. xxx Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
Kailashana

Kailashana

15 years 11 months ago

Dearest Ann, you have

Dearest Ann, you have touched so many here with your poetry, immersed in gentleness, articulation, and kindness. Remember that all of our love, prayers and well wishes shall go with you though we can not be there to hold your hand. Remember that that will also be flowing through your veins and skin. Your sister in Love and Light, Anna "There is a kind of mysticism to writing." ~ Irvine Welsh
M

magics02

15 years 11 months ago

Ann

All I can say to you is I love you and I pray for your wellness on this day and many more to come. You are the kindest, gentle guiding spirit that fills these pages with your mystic love and care for all here. Such an artist you are in more ways then one. Many thoughts with you my Snowlady of Norway. I love this poem and I shall forever keep this. Always know I am here and I care. Love to Longo also if you talk to him Be well my lady be well my friend Love and Peace xoxoxox Mona
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shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

you are exquisit!

just to say i hope i spelt that right!!! Ann you are a Rose in Bloom always, A creator of unique poetry, and its wonderful i hope you are feeling well now! with much love shirl..... shirley harrison
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 11 months ago

Hello

For Fateful: purging the inner demons is a great and brave thing to do. My favorite lines are: enter in to places undesired, exercise the halls that have inspired, pacify the devils now within, banish, excommunicate their whim, starve them, beat them, flail them, shrivel them, send them packing fast, For Meaning Of The Divine: My favorite lines are: our challenges drudge and disappointments, fail to catch the essence of the joy that lies there waiting, use its inspiration, fuel for love and grace, Always, Cat
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Stars of tribute rain on you

Stars of tribute rain on you because you are loved from all corners of the world ... and as you look down its me sending you stars of love and friendship love and biggest hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Stars of tribute rain on you

Stars of tribute rain on you because you are loved from all corners of the world ... and as you look down its me sending you stars of love and friendship love and biggest hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

15 years 11 months ago

I'm almost in tears you darling people; Friends.

Ann of Norway You all, you all, you all overwhelm my feelings with thoughts of you reciprocating the sentiments you send me here and doubling them with my love for you all, all, all. How could I fail to come through just about anything, fire and water, hell fires and drowning, I shall, and I SHALL BE A NEW ANN; ANNUCCIA; JUST YOU SEE IF I 'DON'T!!!!
Rett

Rett

15 years 11 months ago

Ann

What can I say that hasn't already been said? ((HUGS)) Big 5! Respectfully, Rett: “Anyone who sacrifices liberty for security deserves neither.” Benjamin Franklin