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Jul 11, 2010
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Osiris Walks
Osiris Walks
Pale moon rising, shadows dance,
across a rippling Nile
carrying its secrets to the sea
night-things whisper, not by chance,
long-dead Pharoahs smile
revelling in ancient mystery
Shifting sands reveal a tomb
old when Gods were young
allowing it to shimmer in the night
sending forth a song of doom
no human lips had sung
since darkness first did battle with the light
Deep within a shrouded form
arises from its sleep
like a Phoenix from its funeral pyre
spreading madness like a storm
among the human sheep
who willingly embrace its dark desire
And as the desert wind blows cold
across its sea of sand
an eldritch voice begins again to talk
speaking in a tongue so old
no mind can understand
for once again the Lord Osiris walks
C. Lon R. Bruso
Pale moon rising, shadows dance,
across a rippling Nile
carrying its secrets to the sea
night-things whisper, not by chance,
long-dead Pharoahs smile
revelling in ancient mystery
Shifting sands reveal a tomb
old when Gods were young
allowing it to shimmer in the night
sending forth a song of doom
no human lips had sung
since darkness first did battle with the light
Deep within a shrouded form
arises from its sleep
like a Phoenix from its funeral pyre
spreading madness like a storm
among the human sheep
who willingly embrace its dark desire
And as the desert wind blows cold
across its sea of sand
an eldritch voice begins again to talk
speaking in a tongue so old
no mind can understand
for once again the Lord Osiris walks
C. Lon R. Bruso
— Lonnie, Jul 11, 2010
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mona
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Mona!
Beauregard
15 years 11 months ago
night-things whisper --- LOVE LOVE LOVE
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks little Ewok!
Dalton
15 years 11 months ago
First off, well done on crow
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks John!
Tonya
15 years 11 months ago
Excellent, read like an oracle!
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Tonya!
faithmairee
15 years 11 months ago
Great Poem
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Faith!
poewriter58
15 years 11 months ago
Lon
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Dearest!
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
osiris
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Stan!
Candlewitch
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Cat!
Lil Z
15 years 11 months ago
Have you ever written a mediocre write?! :D
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Lil Z!
greeneyes
15 years 11 months ago
Amazing Poem! Wow, you are a
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you so much!
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
Walk like a poet!
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Shirley!
Rett
15 years 11 months ago
Lonnie, this one threw me at first
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Rett!