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Jul 11, 2010
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BIG BANG
Most of the scientists agree
about how we came to be
it all began with a big bang
which rang the void with a huge clang
Everything which came to be
came from this one event you see
planets, stars, and nebulae
everything seen in the sky
From superhot expanding gasses
came slowly condensing masses
gravity pulled masses together
like some kind of cosmic weather
In each huge universal eddy
galaxies formed when they were ready
and in each galactic swirl
stars accreted like a pearl
All of these thing taking place
at a slow and geologic pace
dust left from forming of the stars
became planets like Earth and Mars
On the tiny speck called Earth
occurred supposed random birth
pure chance and chemistry formed life
and life evolved propelled by strife
After multi-million years of time
evolved a species liking rhyme
all started by explosion way back when
resulting in the form of present men
The Big Bang Theory makes the news
I just wonder who lit the fuse?
about how we came to be
it all began with a big bang
which rang the void with a huge clang
Everything which came to be
came from this one event you see
planets, stars, and nebulae
everything seen in the sky
From superhot expanding gasses
came slowly condensing masses
gravity pulled masses together
like some kind of cosmic weather
In each huge universal eddy
galaxies formed when they were ready
and in each galactic swirl
stars accreted like a pearl
All of these thing taking place
at a slow and geologic pace
dust left from forming of the stars
became planets like Earth and Mars
On the tiny speck called Earth
occurred supposed random birth
pure chance and chemistry formed life
and life evolved propelled by strife
After multi-million years of time
evolved a species liking rhyme
all started by explosion way back when
resulting in the form of present men
The Big Bang Theory makes the news
I just wonder who lit the fuse?
— scribbler, Jul 11, 2010
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Dalton
16 years ago
I very intelligent poem I
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16 years ago
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16 years ago
Brilliant Write
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Dear Stan
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16 years ago
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