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Jul 11, 2010
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Lethal Circle
He just left a union
as if he didn't care,
he made his choice
with his own voice,
as if it were not there.
~
Not sure why the hurry
after everything was lost;
Christina feels doubt
he will ever find out,
what exactly was the final cost.
~
She blames not this Ms. Kelly
for hers, is a tiny mind;
she can't comprehend
losing a best friend,
she can't know, proving she's blind.
~
But Walter, in his ignorance
has "skills" he needs to hone;
Christina's too nice
he should heed her advice,
she'll stay friends.....if he'll leave her alone.
as if he didn't care,
he made his choice
with his own voice,
as if it were not there.
~
Not sure why the hurry
after everything was lost;
Christina feels doubt
he will ever find out,
what exactly was the final cost.
~
She blames not this Ms. Kelly
for hers, is a tiny mind;
she can't comprehend
losing a best friend,
she can't know, proving she's blind.
~
But Walter, in his ignorance
has "skills" he needs to hone;
Christina's too nice
he should heed her advice,
she'll stay friends.....if he'll leave her alone.
— docmaverick, Jul 11, 2010
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scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
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Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Doc