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Too Late
Netherworld: The betwixt
And between of one life-time
To the next,
A holding spot of sorts where
We’re given the opportunity
To re-live our regrets, perplexed
A place to think long and hard
On actions we could have taken
To ease the burdens of someone else
Whose pain was unmistaken
Yet, perhaps, when we turned our backs,
We convinced ourselves it was not
Our worry; figured someone else
Would come along,
Besides we were late, couldn’t
Stop, in too big a hurry
These thoughts make us wonder
Why we behaved the way we did
Tear our hearts asunder when
We reveal all that we had hid
What about that man, who was
Down upon his luck; swallowed
His pride and found the courage
Just to ask us for a buck and
Remember all those hateful
Things, words barbed with spite
And hurt; we shouted out in anger
To shred others and disconcert?
Looking back, we ask ourselves,
Why didn’t we take note
To understand all those ideas
So strange and so remote
Is it then we realized all the riches
We ignored, that could have
Filled our life to over-flowing;
Made us so much more
7.10.10
Tonya Greenlee
Critiques
Candlewitch
15 years 11 months ago
Hello
Tonya
15 years 11 months ago
yes, Cat, it does
raj
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Tonya
Tonya
15 years 11 months ago
You make my heart sing, Raj
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Beautifully done, Tonya!
Tonya
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you Lonnie
DawningDaytripper
15 years 11 months ago
Oh I liked this alot, I
Tonya
15 years 11 months ago
hey Julie..