Neopoet

Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

loved
loved
Jul 11, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

I Still Dream

I still dream

I still dream of a summer
Of yonder years
Under the shades of love
And remorse
I still dream,
Of the passion
And
The lovely song
You once sang for me

I still dream
And
Wish to sleep dreaming
Of our union  
Perhaps that would’ve
Lasted an ultimatum
Of the sojourn of a distraught life
So firmly straightened
My dream is not for certain!
























— loved, Jul 11, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

More from this author

Critiques

xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Very nice Loved

So very well written. I love the last line the best... "my dream is not for certain"! Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

**************************************

%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%% TO ALL MY WELL WISHERS AS ABOVE A Star from LOVEDLY ONE AND ONLY THANKS TO ALL OF THEeeeeeeee. PLEASE READ MY REMARKS INDIVIDUALLY AND THANKFULLY FOR THEeeeee for THEEeeeeeee of course for THEEEeeeeeeee
M

magics02

15 years 11 months ago

Loved very nice

Dear Istan how are you doing? I have to catch up to all these missed writes or yours and others. Hope all is fine by you Love,Mona
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

**************************************

%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%% TO ALL MY WELL WISHERS AS ABOVE A Star from LOVEDLY ONE AND ONLY THANKS TO ALL OF THEeeeeeeee. PLEASE READ MY REMARKS INDIVIDUALLY AND THANKFULLY FOR THEeeeee for THEEeeeeeee of course for THEEEeeeeeeee
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Loved

As was already stated: very well written, so wistful. favorite lines: I still dream of a summer Of yonder years Under the shades of love And remorse I still dream, Of the passion And The lovely song Always, Cat
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

**************************************

%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%% TO ALL MY WELL WISHERS AS ABOVE A Star from LOVEDLY ONE AND ONLY THANKS TO ALL OF THEeeeeeeee. PLEASE READ MY REMARKS INDIVIDUALLY AND THANKFULLY FOR THEeeeee for THEEeeeeeee of course for THEEEeeeeeeee
R

raj

15 years 11 months ago

Hello Loved

your write made me float over the the crests and troughs of a dream wave...thanks for the experience... warmly ...raj (sublime_ocean)
S

scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

dream

very good write on complexity of dreams and love........scribbler
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

**************************************

%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%% TO ALL MY WELL WISHERS AS ABOVE A Star from LOVEDLY ONE AND ONLY THANKS TO ALL OF THEeeeeeeee. PLEASE READ MY REMARKS INDIVIDUALLY AND THANKFULLY FOR THEeeeee for THEEeeeeeee of course for THEEEeeeeeeee
SH

shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

My Dear loved!

your voice i can hear its so tender and beautiful! "loss of love" let go of yesterday and think of tomorrow! with much love shirley harrison
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

**************************************

%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%% TO ALL MY WELL WISHERS AS ABOVE A Star from LOVEDLY ONE AND ONLY THANKS TO ALL OF THEeeeeeeee. PLEASE READ MY REMARKS INDIVIDUALLY AND THANKFULLY FOR THEeeeee for THEEeeeeeee of course for THEEEeeeeeeee
faithmairee

faithmairee

15 years 11 months ago

Very Lovely, Loved

Five stars from me because this is so lovely. I can't pick a favorite line because they are all so good. Way to go, Loved! Love-Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

UR Generosity

overwhelms and i love ur praises as you shower them how the world can transform people so well can some one that ever tell u all rrrrrrr an inspppiraatiion 44444444 me thanks go out to thee.... to thee.... to thee