Becoming Serendipity

This piece is resplendent in its brilliance and I bow to you. My favorite lines are: she returns as a moriah on the wind, a whistle through the barley and in a fallen mask of hope a muse that was entranced to dance on the glimmer in my eye, Love, Cat

Queen of the Spotlight..this is one more jewel you deservedly wear in your crown...need i say more? :)...i don't think so...Cat has already said what i would have said otherwise..."brilliant".. much love..raj (sublime_ocean)

you are brilliant my love love hubby xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

Another outstanding poem, JayCee. Wonderful images and flow. Enjoyed reading immensely. raskin

You got it girl just as always right on top of it all. Love to see the rest of it. Great day to you and family today aussie gal Love and hugs at you from across the seas Mona

I love the repetition of Tu-whit! Tu-whoo! I'm assuming it's the song/cry of bird native to Australia. Seren(dipity) it's time for you to kick it up a notch (like Emeril says). Unless you write a poetry book called *100 poems of Life, Love on the theme of Serendipity*. Love ya. ~mum, your best and perhaps your only critic.... "There is a kind of mysticism to writing." ~ Irvine Welsh

Sheer beauty , im guessing tu-whit tu-whoo is an owl? . lou xx

The beauty of your words just slips off your tongue...Wonderful. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

it sounded like more was coming.Also assume tu-wit.....a native birdsong......scribbler

(THIS IS) these are just one of the million things,(no comma needed) I’ve wanted to tell her but we never, (no comma needed) have the time I never really hear about mysteries in the light but they sound much better than mysteries in the dark and this line lends a religious tone to the section, reminds me my childhood Catholicism - "Let us proclaim the mystery of faith."

"There is a kind of mysticism to writing." ~ Irvine Welsh

to wooo! I think it is the sound of a night-bird too! ~ love and hugs, ~ Gee

just superb and as i have also read the comments i will be so excited to read more just brilliant poetry and i love the excitement of the mystery! with much love always shirley harrison

Perfection as always! Elizabeth

Jay-cee I love the word Serendipity. It reminded me of one of my most favourite films where and English girl fall in love with an American man. This was close to my heart. Then I read your wonderous delectable tease. Of course you are the master of weaving words for us to try to find which way to follow. I was going to say the Tu-whit Tu-woo was not a bird at all but on reading your comments you have said it is a native bird of the day and night keeping us wondering in your mystical way and all will be revealed. I agree with Cat my most favourite lines of this are She returns as a moirah on the wind a whistle through the barley and in in the fall mask of hope This is me (you will understand) I find this entrancing, enchanting Thirsting for more, more, more Electric Blue

she returns as a moriah on the wind, a whistle through the barley and in a fallen mask of hope a fine visualization shan