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Zephyrus Dances

Dancing with Zephyrus
in soft velvet skies
the pulse of  surrender
swaying the rise
          
silently drifting,
in love's graceful bliss
remaining aloft 
'mid lover's sweet kiss,

'til last warming breath
of Zephyrus' sigh
enters the dream
of those daring to fly:

to dream the dream of  
extinguished west wind
'til 'morrow's fresh yearnings
once more begin     

 

— brittle light, Jul 11, 2010

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Region, Country: upstate New York USA, USA

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 10 months ago

hello

Excellent in all areas. My favorite lines: ‘til last warming breath of Zephyrus’ sigh enters the dream of those daring to fly: to dream the dream of extinguished west wind ‘til ‘morrow’s fresh yearnings once more begin Always, Cat
Seren

Seren

15 years 10 months ago

Wonderful poem rhythm and

Wonderful poem rhythm and rhyme are spot on .. I loved the same lines as Cat kind regards JayCee