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Jul 10, 2010
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Mis-management...
Acting unconcerned, he pushed it all aside
But with trembling heart a'pounding, he was mortified
Not knowing all the damage, he tried to make it right
Unsure of everything, he stumbled in the night
Thinking of the blame, laid at the other's door
He waited patiently, wore pathways in the floor
Could it be, the way is blocked...the trail to back again
No way to know... no one was told... who could ever tell him
He hadn't meant to sin, exuberance just took the gas
Now he's looking for Exuberance, wants to kick his ass
He's made the promise to himself, and to all of the involved
His mistake won't be repeated, he's really quite resolved
Forgiveness is the balm, that will heal his broken heart
What he really needs, is the chance to push re-start
— Geezer, Jul 10, 2010
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poewriter58
16 years ago
Gee
Geezer
16 years ago
It was meant...
scribbler
16 years ago
mis
Geezer
16 years ago
As I explained...
Seren
16 years ago
Dearest Gee
Geezer
16 years ago
Can't explain...
Geezer
16 years ago
Of all the comments...
lou
16 years ago
Hi
Geezer
16 years ago
Thank you...
lou
16 years ago
Oh gee
Geezer
16 years ago
Wasn't me...
lou
16 years ago
I Bet It was you
DawningDaytripper
16 years ago
Your a great friend Gee, and
Hooded Stranger
16 years ago
Gee
Geezer
16 years ago
Did that...
Candlewitch
16 years ago
A re-start button
Geezer
16 years ago
Thank you...
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