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I had to smile one icy day
As I viewed this peaceful scene;
An offering from heaven
Of three lovely doves of gray
Upon a faded headstone
They sat, as if to say,
We came down for a visit,
So you‘ll no longer be alone
It was as if they knew;
Could see into the past
This man, in his existence,
Was known only to a few
No one had taken time to call
Or dropped by for a chat
He endured a lonely life,
Unknown to almost all
With their downy feathers brushed
They nestled close upon the stone,
Cooed a mournful melody
The winter's weather hushed
Now, I see them often
Clustered close upon the grave
Performing songs in concert
For the loneliness to soften
7.10.2010
Tonya Greenlee
a little differnt rhyme pattern for me. abca, defd, ...etc.. Hope the poem makes sense. It came from a scene i viewed one evening on my drive home. Filled me with such melancholy, I couldn't get it out of my head.
Critiques
Seren
15 years 10 months ago
Dear Tonya
Tonya
15 years 10 months ago
Sure JayCee..