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Platonic whispers

i.

I wanted to face myself
in the mirror of my objection
my truncated reflection
blasphemous darkness
reverberating echoes of light
perchance
to dream with unbending curve,
deep-veined red 

music revolves around the open window
and a house can not stay silent when
Montserrat erupts, splintering the
heart with mountains of green, not even Atlas
can hold the broken weight of a lilied moon

fire is not friendly, does not rekindle
when the breath
burns,
burns
in effigy and all the gods are dead and buried

ii.

let me weep then, let me weep for all
the born and unborn
let the pity of human embrace
bear my soul, lay me down and let me
take refuge in the eviscerating night,
let the banyan and the willow bind their flailing branches
yoke my roots and cut deep my image.





— Kailashana, Jul 10, 2010

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Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

You know you make it look

You know you make it look easy sometimes ... Brava love and big hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

15 years 11 months ago

not even Atlas can hold the broken weight of a lilied moon

Ann of Norway But you can my Anna of Ohio, my sister you can. This painting has a surrealist quality and is as deviously contrived as such, with allusions to the religious that colour the sensation of reading it. Love from your sister, who finds herself in Douanier Rousseau's jungle where the snake and the mysterious lady abide. Ann.*
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shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Anna

just wonderful poetry,as usual i can see someone who is screaming to be free from something! Much love shirl....... shirley harrison