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Cleft



moist contact
these dewy flakes
drifting like slow
candle light

crystal fire turning
like darkness
in tall spire

I can reach out
and melt them
taste them
and they crawl
like tears
down your dark
brow

gather on the sadness
like slush cool
in the gutters

our city glows tallow
neath the clouds
the streets are polished
with the quiet dead
of evening

take our hands and
feel our hearts sadness
like love you notes
in summer sands

I could kiss away
the blues on your
beautiful pain
touch my winter
hands to your summer
haze

and your gaze
graces my
emptiness
like polite
melancholy notes

How I wait forever
on the bridge
while the water
sings its sorrow

and I listen for
your footsteps

— Esker, Jul 10, 2010

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Esker

Esker

15 years 11 months ago

Break of Two

a comment and a poem I cant help it I had to look back this is about the place between two halves of the hearts the place where love nestles like snow caught like raindrops savoured I wait...
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pleiades

15 years 11 months ago

mr e…this is writing

mr e...this is writing sublime a journey of the heart that starts with a single thought thrown to the winds of chance the beauty of this made me ache ...in a good way when i read a poem that makes me feel as if the words are carrying me along...i know i'm reading real poetry again my friend, i have to use that word i so often use about your poetry... beautiful beautiful beautiful your last 6 lines, in context with the whole poem, are simply breathtaking i sigh deeply... your friend p
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

cleft

I usually have trouble completing a read of free verse that is in this type of drawn out form,but not this time!Easily read and comprehended.....scribbler
whitetea

whitetea

15 years 11 months ago

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perfect overlap a quiet wild beauty drips above the spheres