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you are not alone

when you need somebody to talk with,

i’ll be always here,

just as when you need someone to hold you back,

i’ll carry you with care,

when you see confusions on the road,

i’ll show you the way,

when you feel down and blue,

i’ll do brighten your day,

when you get lost in the dark,

i’ll be your light,

when you met your restlessness,

i’ll be your night,

when you met puzzles in your life,

i’ll help to play,

when you need someone to love you the most,

i am here to stay.
— whitescatter, Jul 10, 2010

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Region, Country: Laguna, PHL

Favorite Poets: William Shakespeare And the NeoPoet Family

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Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Whitescatter

beautiful poem ... nothing I would change on a first read but I will be back eventually lol love JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
Mark

Mark

15 years 10 months ago

Whitescatter, hello

This is a nice letter ! I would work with it some more. I would try changing met to meet and taking out some or all of the commas. Basically continue to work with it. Regards, Mark