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SUMMER SONG

Another sunny summer day
   has now seen fit to come our way
   and brought along a deep blue sky
   that's beautiful to any eye

All the trees are fully dressed
   by heat of day not quite yet stressed
   their canopies give welcome shade
   a cool respite to sunny glade

A quiet walk through leafy green
   can lead to some sights seldom seen
   like turkey poults and velvet deer
   and all of spring's young creatures here

'Midst humid air that has grown hazy
    forest's denizens move slow and lazy
    the penalty for moving fast
    oft' being referred to as "past"

Yet in the shade near cool clear spring
    where peepers and the bullfrogs sing
   you still can catch a breath of air
   while resting there without a care

This time of year is full of sound
   as birds and bugs attempt to drown
   out rival suitors' mating calls
   hoping that their tunes a mate enthralls

Water loving plants are getting wilted
   for by rain they have been jilted
   perhaps a wondering thundershower
   will help them to regain their power

This season that's so full of life
   along with its inherent strife
   while stuffy and too full of heat
   will soon be recalled as being neat

For as August days run out of sand
   slight hints of fall soon come to hand


— scribbler, Jul 09, 2010

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Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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lou

lou

15 years 11 months ago

Stan

A dreamy summer poem , evokes such lovely feelings. lou xx
xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Awe

What a lovely summer's day you describe. Beautiful write Stan. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
S

scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

summer

thank you for the kind words.spring and fall yet to come......scribbler
B

barbsdad2003

15 years 11 months ago

Really ...

nice. Balanced, well flowing. And unlike so many rhyming pieces (too often posted), the rhyming here does not interfere with content---at all. If I may mention a few tweaks I think you might agree, at least in some instances, are perhaps in order: - out rival suitor’s mating calls hoping that their tune a mate enthralls Line 1: I'd make it suitors' mating calls Line 2: hoping that their tune[s] a mate enthralls or Line 1: Leave it as is. Line 2: hoping that [his] tune a mate enthralls - Water[-]loving plants are getting wilted for by rain they have been jilted perhaps a w[a]ndering thundershower will help them to regain their power - This season that[']s so full of life along with it[]s inherent strife - In all a beautiful write. Thanx for the pleasure reading. Chuck
S

scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

summer

thanks for the careful read Chuck.Good to have people point out mistakes I miss so I can correct.........scribbler P.S.seems apostrophes give me fits lol
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Stan

Send summer back down to us lol its freezing down here lol lovely poem hun makes me yearn for the heat back love and hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
S

scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

heat

I'll go on back deck and fan air in southerly direction.It should arrive in about 5 months lol.Thanks for visit......scribbler
S

scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

song

Thanks for your kind comment and read.......scribbler
SH

shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

Stan The Man

I love the way you embrace the nature and its beauty and write it so very well in poetry its truly wonderful! I really could dream of a picnic with you and your wonderul wife! "Stan in wonderland" with much love and a hug today shirl....... shirley harrison
S

scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

song

Most people go to church to be with God.The church I attend is the one He built.....Stan
LZ

Lil Z

15 years 11 months ago

Summer!

You made this season just that much better in this poem!
S

scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

song

glad you liked it......scribbler