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Jul 09, 2010
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Infestation
Infestation
An ancient God awakens,
stretching fungus-grey tentacles
towards the distant light;
summoned by discordant chants
and primordial sorcery
He is neither good nor evil,
but transcends both
in his appetite for cosmic chaos;
wallowing in his own filth,
he slithers toward life
A portal opens,
and dragon-headed avatars
roar of his arrival;
then, slake their thirst
on the blood of his minions
Famished, he feeds,
first on the chosen,
then on the innocent;
tasting no difference
as he ingests their essence
He copulates with demons,
rendering them mindless
as they devour his seed;
then, he waits patiently,
for the inevitable birth of humanity
C. Lon R. Bruso
An ancient God awakens,
stretching fungus-grey tentacles
towards the distant light;
summoned by discordant chants
and primordial sorcery
He is neither good nor evil,
but transcends both
in his appetite for cosmic chaos;
wallowing in his own filth,
he slithers toward life
A portal opens,
and dragon-headed avatars
roar of his arrival;
then, slake their thirst
on the blood of his minions
Famished, he feeds,
first on the chosen,
then on the innocent;
tasting no difference
as he ingests their essence
He copulates with demons,
rendering them mindless
as they devour his seed;
then, he waits patiently,
for the inevitable birth of humanity
C. Lon R. Bruso
— Lonnie, Jul 09, 2010
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poewriter58
16 years ago
Wow
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Dear!
Dalton
16 years ago
neither good nor evil
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thanks, Dalton!
scribbler
16 years ago
infestation
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Stan!
weirdelf
16 years ago
oh man! dark, dark,
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Jess!
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, JayCee!
Candlewitch
16 years ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, dear Lady!
loved
16 years ago
just about
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Loved!
loved
16 years ago
thanks an add on now
Lil Z
16 years ago
Yep, This is good!
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thanks, Lil Z!
greeneyes
16 years ago
Wonderful poem! I loved
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thanks, Green Eyes!
shirley harrison
16 years ago
"Fabulous"
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thanks, Shirley!
Tonya Greenlee
16 years ago
So, That was the birth
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thanks, Tonya!
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