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Your Loving Eyes
Your eyes a beauty so lovely and true
The gift of sight I want only from you.
As you look into my wondering eyes
A wave of emotion in me does arise.
And how I’ve become so very eager,
To possess you in a full view fever
And “Oh my God” if only you knew,
How much I yearn and love to see you.
Your eyes give me a lustrous shine
I wish in this world were only mine.
But hope a special someone will some day
Drown in your lovely eyes and play
But before I go the world shall see
Those eyes they once belonged to me.
So give up your own before it’s too late;
For many aspirants wait at your gate.
Someone will love to look through these
The sight they ’ll make will surely please.
But some later day do remember the blind
For my lovely eyes another will find.
When of all these, we really have no need
Below the earth we will lie cold indeed.
Your eyes are for me,
For me
For me
Mine are only yours
As long as life endures.
But surely as time passes along
Then someone else will play your song
And us to ourselves will no more belong.
Critiques
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dearest Loved
loved
15 years 11 months ago
yes without the Professor 'twouldv'e been nought
raj
15 years 11 months ago
Loved
loved
15 years 11 months ago
UR WONderful commen
ziggy
15 years 11 months ago
hi
loved
15 years 11 months ago
beautiful words of ur songdo
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
Eyes!
loved
15 years 11 months ago
without your encouragement where would I HAVE BEEN??? THANKS
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
i am your biggest Fan!
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
eyes
loved
15 years 11 months ago
thanks for the spot light
loved
15 years 11 months ago
i shall take this
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Loved
loved
15 years 11 months ago
the stars
faithmairee
15 years 11 months ago
Wonderfully Written
loved
15 years 11 months ago
thanks i knew
mona
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Loved
loved
15 years 11 months ago
my memory
KingINwaiting
15 years 11 months ago
Nice. this is the first poem
loved
15 years 11 months ago
thanks fot ur maiden comments
Ammus
15 years 11 months ago
god bless them
loved
15 years 11 months ago
thanks friend after
Kailashana
15 years 11 months ago
*Communicate in melodious
loved
15 years 11 months ago
I am a simple
Lil Z
15 years 11 months ago
I loved this Loved!
greeneyes
15 years 11 months ago
Beautiful! I love your