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TWO PHILOSOPHICAL THOUGHTS

"FORCED PURGATORY" Margaret Ann Waddicor 7th July 2010.

 

I am to have Star Wars treatment,

placed in bondage in my space, 

laced and strapped and branded, 

ready for initiation fires

to permeate my skin, purge my sin, 

enter in to places undesired, 

exercise the halls that have inspired, 

pacify the devils now within, 

banish, excommunicate their whim,

starve them, beat them, flail them, shrivel them,

send them packing fast, 

save the rest a cavernous shell,

glean the remnants of my soul, 

change the negative into positive flow, 

a strange enlightenment method, 

so brutal, so brave, transformed, 

perhaps deformed and changed.

 

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 "SYMBOLIC LIFE" Ann 7th July 2010.

 

Years fly by but hesitate now and then,

when birthdays come we contemplate

we celebrate those fleeting moments,

concretise them, 

give them shape and meaning. 

even though they are mere numbers, even so,

they give life form, 

without which we wouldn't know

how long or short the days were, 

only seasons of the sun would tell the tale;

 

I wonder how we'd do and feel, 

even perceive our worth,

without the use of symbols,

describing our source, our birth, 

who knows, and now I've reached a sum 

that's round, or so they say,

as round as round the world this life goes by,

just one of many beating hearts that sigh, 

and wonder why, so strangely mysterious is life, 

as ever, as aye.


 

 
— Nordic cloud, Jul 09, 2010

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

15 years 11 months ago

Yes, dear Ann… always the

Yes, dear Ann... always the changing changeling, Much love and many hugs to you from Anna and Barry. "There is a kind of mysticism to writing." ~ Irvine Welsh
Geezer

Geezer

15 years 11 months ago

Purging...

Is a form of medicine. In the days of the Gods of old, people purged and flailed their bodies. In certain tribes of N.American indians sweat-lodges and fasting began rites of passage. I hope that your treatments of said purging, will make you feel whole and pure again. love from your knight, ~ Sir Gee
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

My Dearest Friend

On coming to the end of my friends list ... I found this ... shattering write my darling poetess of natures palette love and biggest hugs JayCee those questions you asked I will answer today ive been away and just got home (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

thoughts

some say the ability to use symbols is one of the things that make human;as in the use of them in this astute write........scribbler
M

magics02

15 years 11 months ago

Great write Ann

I loved how this whole write of yours read to me. I feel it is about a birthday, maybe not? I hope this little message finds you feeling well today and always love your writings. I bow Love Mona xoxox
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

15 years 11 months ago

Hello sweet smile

Ann of Norway It was written on my birthday and of course that creeps into the consciousness when on that day I write. So in many ways yes. I am well and not over worried, the first things start this Monday, then I shall know more. Thank you for your concern dear magic Mona. Love from Ann XX