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Jul 09, 2010
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how do you say so long
how do you say
so long to someone
who has given you
so much joy and happiness
for sixteen years
who now lays near-lifeless
in your aching arms
i can not say goodbye, dear one
i will not say goodbye
no, not now or ever
just rest well, my sweet angel
and know you were my love
yes, you were my life
so long to someone
who has given you
so much joy and happiness
for sixteen years
who now lays near-lifeless
in your aching arms
i can not say goodbye, dear one
i will not say goodbye
no, not now or ever
just rest well, my sweet angel
and know you were my love
yes, you were my life
— faithmairee, Jul 09, 2010
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xena465
15 years 11 months ago
It's not easy...
faithmairee
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Xena
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
sad yet powreful!
faithmairee
15 years 11 months ago
Thank You, Shirley
Kailashana
15 years 11 months ago
I remember asking my mom
faithmairee
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Anna
Mari Shine
15 years 11 months ago
This very tender and finely
faithmairee
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you so much, Mari
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
so long
magics02
15 years 11 months ago
Faith
faithmairee
15 years 11 months ago
Thank You Both