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Jul 09, 2010
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Life is but a filament
Of love and hatred's strife
Entwined within each other
Such bright existence requires:
Fire and heat to warm me
When nights are dull with shame,
Frigid cold to chill me
When flames burn out my shell;
Arms sent out to hold me
Should fear resides my spine,
Hands that need to pull me
If I cross that dotted line;
Friends who came to guide me
Where no one lights my way,
Foes that will remind me
I needed someone's aid.
I lived and died a hungry man
Yet you're here to share my pain
Though life devours my happiness
As hopelessness remain.
You are the fire that warms me,
The wind that chills my core;
The hands that hold and shove me,
The friend-foe I adore.
Of love and hatred's strife
Entwined within each other
Such bright existence requires:
Fire and heat to warm me
When nights are dull with shame,
Frigid cold to chill me
When flames burn out my shell;
Arms sent out to hold me
Should fear resides my spine,
Hands that need to pull me
If I cross that dotted line;
Friends who came to guide me
Where no one lights my way,
Foes that will remind me
I needed someone's aid.
I lived and died a hungry man
Yet you're here to share my pain
Though life devours my happiness
As hopelessness remain.
You are the fire that warms me,
The wind that chills my core;
The hands that hold and shove me,
The friend-foe I adore.
— Dennis Go, Jul 09, 2010
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Critiques
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Superb Dennis
Dennis Go
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks Xena
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Sorry Dennis
Dennis Go
15 years 11 months ago
:)
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
so wonderful you do write!
Dennis Go
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks Shirley
raskin
15 years 11 months ago
Very nice, I like your usage
Dennis Go
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks Raskin
Mari Shine
15 years 11 months ago
A fine indepth write in this
Dennis Go
15 years 11 months ago
:)
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Dennis
Dennis Go
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks Everyone!
Dennis Go
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks JayCee
faithmairee
15 years 11 months ago
Very Nice Work
Dennis Go
15 years 11 months ago
:)