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Jul 08, 2010
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poets must dance
who danced when the wind along the fence line was blind?
alone along the leaves
emptied shadows
there my father said goodbye in the sunless silence
and poets must dance when their hands are small
I learned to find you there
as the stones of fathers become playful in the passing water
where the sun and rain have picked their way
through each yesterday
and sit beside you like love
on the falling green....
alone along the leaves
emptied shadows
there my father said goodbye in the sunless silence
and poets must dance when their hands are small
I learned to find you there
as the stones of fathers become playful in the passing water
where the sun and rain have picked their way
through each yesterday
and sit beside you like love
on the falling green....
— Orphani, Jul 08, 2010
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Kailashana
16 years ago
Barry, you know how I love
Seth F. Hines
16 years ago
Thank you
faithmairee
16 years ago
Great poem
Seren
16 years ago
Dear B
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
Oh Barry, oh Barry, oh Barry, oh Barry!!!!!
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