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Jul 08, 2010
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REFLECTION
Who's that person that I see
in mirror looking back at me
with jowly cheeks and shiny pate?
he looks so tired and over weight
I know this dude can't be named Stan
for he's a much,much younger man
a master of football and track
can't you bring that young guy back?
Reflection should have thick brown hair
and muscles bulging everywhere
for at the age of twenty three
he was all that he could be
His gait was longer,sure and free
unfettered by an injured knee
this old guy's stride is kinda funny
at least his dispositions sunny
The kid I was that I still see
could work hard all day long
but this older reflected me
tires when just hearing song
When I was young I dressed in style
and laughed at stretch waist jeans
now only comfort makes me smile
attained by any means
This reflected older guy
has overgrown the younger man
although he jokes and might be spry
a glimpse is all you'll see of Stan
With each day lived or verse wrote down
I turn another page
and hope the young girl I still love
still sees beyond my age
in mirror looking back at me
with jowly cheeks and shiny pate?
he looks so tired and over weight
I know this dude can't be named Stan
for he's a much,much younger man
a master of football and track
can't you bring that young guy back?
Reflection should have thick brown hair
and muscles bulging everywhere
for at the age of twenty three
he was all that he could be
His gait was longer,sure and free
unfettered by an injured knee
this old guy's stride is kinda funny
at least his dispositions sunny
The kid I was that I still see
could work hard all day long
but this older reflected me
tires when just hearing song
When I was young I dressed in style
and laughed at stretch waist jeans
now only comfort makes me smile
attained by any means
This reflected older guy
has overgrown the younger man
although he jokes and might be spry
a glimpse is all you'll see of Stan
With each day lived or verse wrote down
I turn another page
and hope the young girl I still love
still sees beyond my age
— scribbler, Jul 08, 2010
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Critiques
Kailashana
15 years 11 months ago
Awww shucks.The image in the
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
image
raskin
15 years 11 months ago
Aw, this is really good.
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
reflection
Marie-I-Be
15 years 11 months ago
reflective reflection
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
reflection
magics02
15 years 11 months ago
The man in the mirror
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
reflection
magics02
15 years 11 months ago
Yes dearest friend
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
try now
magics02
15 years 11 months ago
Bravo
Grieta Lindeque
15 years 11 months ago
Good work
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
hey Grieta
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
You're a fine looking chap Stan
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
reflection
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
Stan the Man
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
Shirley
lou
15 years 11 months ago
Stan
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
reflection
Professor Purple
15 years 11 months ago
Another great one!
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
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Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Stan what poignancy lies in
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
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Lil Z
15 years 11 months ago
Another one!
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
reflection
raskin
15 years 11 months ago
I like this poem scribbler,
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
reflection