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Someone is Calling by my Name

Someone is calling by my name,
That too in the vast multitude;
I cannot answer out of shame,
Nor strength, nor fortitude.

Someone is pursuing me here,
That too in the vast multitude;
Tell me whether I should care,
Or simply be in my solitude.

Someone is searching for strength,
And for me in the multitude;
Waiting for me at length,
With the time of ugly decrepitude.

Someone is bearing all my wrath,
Pretending from the multitude;
And taking tears for the bath,
Embraced all my attitude.
— Ayaz Warith, Jul 08, 2010

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weirdelf

weirdelf

15 years 11 months ago

Great first post, enjoyed it very much

superb wordcrafting. I'm not convinced attitude is the best word for the last line though, it has connotations of shallow agressiveness to many. Or is that what you meant? Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible,
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Ayaz Warith

15 years 11 months ago

Thanks Jess

You know, actually the poet is striking attitude, and that's how his indifference reflects. This was just a fleeting behaviour he is showing. But I say Thank You So Much.
xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Welcome to Neo Ayaz

Like Jess, I think this is a very clever write too. Well done. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
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Ayaz Warith

15 years 11 months ago

Thanks Xena

Thank you so much Xena.I am describing here how and what this person is doing for me in all the four stanzas.
faithmairee

faithmairee

15 years 11 months ago

Very Well Done

What a wonderful poem. I love the title, your use of language and how it flows so well. Your delivery was very powerful. Great poem! Love-Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
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Ayaz Warith

15 years 11 months ago

Thanks to all my friends

Thanks to aal my friends. You know what? This is the place where I have seen the gems of poets. Each poem I read I fall in love with the writer. I am not kidding nor am I lying!
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Ayaz Warith

15 years 11 months ago

Thanks to all my friends

Thanks to all my friends. You know what? This is the place where I have seen the gems of poets. Each poem I read I fall in love with the writer. I am not kidding nor am I lying!
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magics02

15 years 11 months ago

Nice one and welcome abroad

This is good and the poem of wrath awaits upon another write. Learn much, write often and grow as a writer. Great fresh start for you, liked it very much Mona