Loves a MIRAGE

Loves a MIRAGE

Hope your real love

Comes your way

And
the desert of your life

Only oasis’s does display

The love you seek is like a mirage

Go to the deserts of life

Then and there
at your loved one barge

Be bold and charge

Hopefully

You will find your love at large.

— loved, Jul 08, 2010

About This Poem

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Country/Region: ROU

Critiques

shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

your my beloved loved!

so different so beautiful so gracefull thats you! stunning write and wonderful message! with love to my beloved shirley harrison

scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

mirage

this "Less" is definitely "More".Wonderful imagery in minimal words.....scribbler

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Loved

I wish I could find the desert of life. Perhaps I'd find my Mr Right eh? Very nice Loved. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

Ammus

15 years 11 months ago

ammusshort and sweet..:)

ammus short and sweet..:)

loved

15 years 11 months ago

THANKS GO TO UUUUUUUUUUU

lovely hope ur hubby does not see that u still converse with me

loved

15 years 11 months ago

helo frnd

hope ur hubby does not see that u still converse with me