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loved
loved
Jul 08, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Loves a MIRAGE

Loves a MIRAGE

 

Hope your real love

Comes your way

And
the desert of your life

Only oasis’s does display

The love you seek is like a mirage

Go to the deserts of life

Then and there
at your loved one barge

Be bold and charge

Hopefully

You will find your love at large.

— loved, Jul 08, 2010

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shirley harrison

16 years ago

your my beloved loved!

so different so beautiful so gracefull thats you! stunning write and wonderful message! with love to my beloved shirley harrison
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scribbler

16 years ago

mirage

this "Less" is definitely "More".Wonderful imagery in minimal words.....scribbler
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Dear Loved

I wish I could find the desert of life. Perhaps I'd find my Mr Right eh? Very nice Loved. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
loved

loved

16 years ago

helo frnd

hope ur hubby does not see that u still converse with me

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