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Jul 08, 2010
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Despair Brunt
light casts
working trim line fair
I catch the sweat that falls
from your fingers
timid like hot rains
in fire skies
the ashes swiftly turning
grey on our arms
bathing like salt lick
erosion
the heat turning clay to dust
and surmising the sun
in chalk dust love
tips to teach
like breaking oysters
with the knife
sucking sweet juice
and licking tender chill
flesh
fresh packed in ice
and flown in
and the hungry sky fills
our need like water
and bread
and this spring
keeps trickling
cold life
and the suns blade
is cutting the song
of the ciccada
carving emotion
waving in the breeze
thick and black like
blood on the stone
and the waves carry
your footprints to the
bottom
like my love
that sinks
with the moon
and the ferry caught
stars twist from the
stern
speaking illusion
in their midst
they speak your name
to my listening lips
fret not my love
let freedom be
— Esker, Jul 08, 2010
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Critiques
Esker
15 years 11 months ago
culled from old letters
raskin
15 years 11 months ago
Your images play well in my
Electric Blue
15 years 11 months ago
Dispair Brunt
Esker
15 years 11 months ago
insense and cigarettes