Dragon Breath

i liked this poem, it let my mind wonder, i found this poem to have good connotations

lovely descriptive elizabeth did you ever see the movie 'pete's dragon'? love to you judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

a magical poem very enjoyable ,you took me on a journey i loved every word! much love shirley harrison

beware dragons!In last verse he has already begun"smoking"you for a later snack scribbler......LOL......

Have you read "Weave World" by Clive Barker, there is a scene in the book when a woman and an insane cop that has been hunting for her, and the precious weave she cxarries (in which is hidden a world), is transformed into a dragon and a maiden hidden in a deep forrest. Then it seems that the maiden is more deadly than the dragon, then the maiden becomes the dragon and the dragon takes her place. There is a line in the book that says: "Nothing, that can be dreamed, need ever be lost" or something I like that. Its a wonderful book, I'm sure would appeal to you. nice poem, john

I watched and really enjoyed the film `Dragon Rider`, I don’t know if you’ve seen that one, a wee bit violent, but the dragon, a female, was wise, cute, and very kind. So I wouldn’t mind snuggling up to and feeling protected by a dragon. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

I like the notion of dragons being friendly, and this line: "Think of the marshmallow roast" I find hilarious! One change I suggest is to stick to conditional for the last stanza, like: "Sleep would come easy, as I'd curl in his breast, The air made soothing by his snores, I'd slumber underneath a cloud of smoke." Also, I changed "maded" to "made". I have a thing for nice, gentle dragons. Antoine

Have you seen the movie or read the book "Eragon?" I'd love to have my very own dragon friend! Love, Cat

And the next book in the series Cat is called Eldest have you read it ?? i cant wait for the third lol loved your poem gave me a smile love and hugs JayCee (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)