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Dennis Go
Dennis Go
Jul 07, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Tomorrow

Looks like tomorrow I'll come
With not more but my life
To show, unlike before when love
Can never be seen gazing
Along horizons of the oceans.

I'll sail across a thousand-mile
Latitude and prove me not wrong,
Setting my sights on tomorrow
Where I can see your distinct smile
Guiding me across the pitfalls of dreams.
— Dennis Go, Jul 07, 2010

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Region, Country: Manila, PHL

Favorite Poets: R.S. Thomas, William Blake, Emily Dickinson, Dylan Thomas

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Critiques

faithmairee

faithmairee

15 years 11 months ago

Very Nice

Simply but beautifully written. Very nice work. Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
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shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

oh Dennis

this is so wonderful, always look forward and never back! great poetry! with much love shirley harrison
Dennis Go

Dennis Go

15 years 11 months ago

Thanks Green Eyes

Thanks for your kind comment. I'll add you up on my buddy list if you don't mind. :)
MS

Mari Shine

15 years 11 months ago

Wonderful penning in this

Wonderful penning in this delightful poem Dennis. Love portrayed for someone so special in each and every line. Delightfully expressed and filled with Hope, I so pray that all your dreams come true and all your wishes are fulfilled. I adore the simplicity of style, which enhances the write. You have painted beautiful pictures with your artistic pen Dennis and your words flow so smoothly and effortlessly from your very warm heart. Thank You for so kindly sharing Dennis. Excellent work!
Dennis Go

Dennis Go

15 years 11 months ago

:)

Thanks again Mari!
xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Wow Dennis

Beautiful. Dreams, what would we be without them. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

tomorrow

guided into the future by the lighthouse of a smile.very nice......scribbler
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Dennis

Sigh exquisite poetry ... just beautiful I cannot fault perfection love JayCee (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)