Dennis Go

Jul 07, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Tomorrow

Looks like tomorrow I'll come
With not more but my life
To show, unlike before when love
Can never be seen gazing
Along horizons of the oceans.

I'll sail across a thousand-mile
Latitude and prove me not wrong,
Setting my sights on tomorrow
Where I can see your distinct smile
Guiding me across the pitfalls of dreams.

— Dennis Go, Jul 07, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: Manila, PHL

Favorite Poets: R.S. Thomas, William Blake, Emily Dickinson, Dylan Thomas

Critiques

faithmairee

16 years ago

Very Nice

Simply but beautifully written. Very nice work. Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

Dennis Go

16 years ago

:)

Thanks Faith!

shirley harrison

16 years ago

oh Dennis

this is so wonderful, always look forward and never back! great poetry! with much love shirley harrison

Dennis Go

16 years ago

:)

Thanks Shirley!

greeneyes

16 years ago

What a beautiful piece of

What a beautiful piece of poetry! Very good!

Dennis Go

16 years ago

Thanks Green Eyes

Thanks for your kind comment. I'll add you up on my buddy list if you don't mind. :)

Mari Shine

16 years ago

Wonderful penning in this

Wonderful penning in this delightful poem Dennis. Love portrayed for someone so special in each and every line. Delightfully expressed and filled with Hope, I so pray that all your dreams come true and all your wishes are fulfilled. I adore the simplicity of style, which enhances the write. You have painted beautiful pictures with your artistic pen Dennis and your words flow so smoothly and effortlessly from your very warm heart. Thank You for so kindly sharing Dennis. Excellent work!

Dennis Go

16 years ago

:)

Thanks again Mari!

xena465

16 years ago

Wow Dennis

Beautiful. Dreams, what would we be without them. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

Dennis Go

16 years ago

:)

Thanks Xena!

scribbler

16 years ago

tomorrow

guided into the future by the lighthouse of a smile.very nice......scribbler

Dennis Go

16 years ago

Thanks Scribbler :)

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Dennis

Sigh exquisite poetry ... just beautiful I cannot fault perfection love JayCee (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)

Dennis Go

16 years ago