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Sky Watch '10

my back and neck tends, to cause me to look down
so, i focus on the horizon;

I refuse to carry extra weight that surely would astound,
or suffer my indignation.

I'm trim, I'm lean, I'm a sleek design,
I'm guessing for longevity;

I'm not sure what the heavens had in mind,
soon I'll eat of the knowledge tree.

Aside from that, while walking along...
..just know, I see everything;

so I'm learning words to most all of the song,
providing oh, so many to sing.

Most of the times, my throat does get stuck
and my swallow stops short with each word;

with more to reveal, I can't blame it on luck
to believe that that's just, "crazy absurd".

After these times, it's hard to hold one's head....high;
and relax with the fireworks;

because lately I'd rather look down, and just cry...
..than to realize these political jerks;

so if after the summer, I'm still seen looking down,
I'm not purposely trying to be curt;

I'm just trying to hide my American Frown
because I've seen too much loss, and such "hurt".
— docmaverick, Jul 07, 2010

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Antoinette Mar…

15 years 11 months ago

Looking down.....isn't by choice, my son....of this I know....

But still you find something to write about that is interesting ...there is a reward in looking down ....if nothing else but to pick up a lucky penny... enjoyed the write...but do not enjoy your pain....but join you in "seeing Everything" as I know you do...........................Antoinette Mari