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Jul 07, 2010
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The Surgeon (A Man Should Enjoy His Work)
The Surgeon 2 (A Man Should Enjoy His Work)
The gleaming blade of cold hard steel
slinks across the sharpening stone
the steady rasp, rasp, rasp
sets the teeth on edge, but that's
a minor inconvenience
The cold marble floor is spotted
with memories of past pleasures
that run through memory sending
shivers of pleasure up and down
the spine
memories that still bring the
inhuman pleasure of past loves,
yes loves, for he loved each of them
the love only gained through their
ultimate sacrifice for his pleasure
She stands now supported on
trembling legs, long, shapely
legs in stiletto heels
body bared for his pleasure
arms reaching toward the ceiling
where they are manacled and chained
Her eyes now filled with the delicious
fear of anticipation, wide with the terror
she cannot express,
the mercy she wants to beg for
the gag makes sure
that nothing will distract him
He rises from his chair
the blade gleaming in the light
as he carreses her body with
the flat of the blade
sending shivers
coursing along
jangling nerves
He takes great pleasure in his work
a surgeon really should enjoy what he does
The gleaming blade of cold hard steel
slinks across the sharpening stone
the steady rasp, rasp, rasp
sets the teeth on edge, but that's
a minor inconvenience
The cold marble floor is spotted
with memories of past pleasures
that run through memory sending
shivers of pleasure up and down
the spine
memories that still bring the
inhuman pleasure of past loves,
yes loves, for he loved each of them
the love only gained through their
ultimate sacrifice for his pleasure
She stands now supported on
trembling legs, long, shapely
legs in stiletto heels
body bared for his pleasure
arms reaching toward the ceiling
where they are manacled and chained
Her eyes now filled with the delicious
fear of anticipation, wide with the terror
she cannot express,
the mercy she wants to beg for
the gag makes sure
that nothing will distract him
He rises from his chair
the blade gleaming in the light
as he carreses her body with
the flat of the blade
sending shivers
coursing along
jangling nerves
He takes great pleasure in his work
a surgeon really should enjoy what he does
— Rett, Jul 07, 2010
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xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Geeze Rett
Rett
15 years 11 months ago
Well, I didn't
Geezer
15 years 11 months ago
Killer was...
Rett
15 years 11 months ago
*LOL* Thanks Gee