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Jul 07, 2010
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relativity in the art of spices, tiles and stones
you wanted pure form I wanted essence
compressed black and white tiles
lying
but we wrote poetry
I had kitchen scents and spices,
a teacup bittersweet with analogies
pouring somewhere,
the heart doesn't make overtures or
erasures
you had a barn you wanted painted
with phrases that meant more than your
words had to say, or could say without a noose
around our necks
we write these echoes of abandon with flowers wilting
dead and dying
ripened mangoes dripping off our roguish tongues
students of
our bodies merging, rendezvousing
parables of light and dark in hours
unforeseen,
twilight gods
awestruck in the tinderbox that is love,
swans copulating with the necks of poems,
bare trees
shivering with the death of our self-righteous
mocking Paradise, we write of stones
compressed black and white tiles
lying
but we wrote poetry
I had kitchen scents and spices,
a teacup bittersweet with analogies
pouring somewhere,
the heart doesn't make overtures or
erasures
you had a barn you wanted painted
with phrases that meant more than your
words had to say, or could say without a noose
around our necks
we write these echoes of abandon with flowers wilting
dead and dying
ripened mangoes dripping off our roguish tongues
students of
our bodies merging, rendezvousing
parables of light and dark in hours
unforeseen,
twilight gods
awestruck in the tinderbox that is love,
swans copulating with the necks of poems,
bare trees
shivering with the death of our self-righteous
mocking Paradise, we write of stones
— Kailashana, Jul 07, 2010
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Candlewitch
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Anna
Kailashana
15 years 11 months ago
Irony, that’s it!
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
No words … Brava and a bow
Kailashana
15 years 11 months ago
Sigh.~The whole modern world
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Sigh … hugs x x
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
With a
Kailashana
15 years 11 months ago
glad you liked the title,
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
I'm BAAA..CK