Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Jul 07, 2010
⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature
relativity in the art of spices, tiles and stones
you wanted pure form I wanted essence
compressed black and white tiles
lying
but we wrote poetry
I had kitchen scents and spices,
a teacup bittersweet with analogies
pouring somewhere,
the heart doesn't make overtures or
erasures
you had a barn you wanted painted
with phrases that meant more than your
words had to say, or could say without a noose
around our necks
we write these echoes of abandon with flowers wilting
dead and dying
ripened mangoes dripping off our roguish tongues
students of
our bodies merging, rendezvousing
parables of light and dark in hours
unforeseen,
twilight gods
awestruck in the tinderbox that is love,
swans copulating with the necks of poems,
bare trees
shivering with the death of our self-righteous
mocking Paradise, we write of stones
compressed black and white tiles
lying
but we wrote poetry
I had kitchen scents and spices,
a teacup bittersweet with analogies
pouring somewhere,
the heart doesn't make overtures or
erasures
you had a barn you wanted painted
with phrases that meant more than your
words had to say, or could say without a noose
around our necks
we write these echoes of abandon with flowers wilting
dead and dying
ripened mangoes dripping off our roguish tongues
students of
our bodies merging, rendezvousing
parables of light and dark in hours
unforeseen,
twilight gods
awestruck in the tinderbox that is love,
swans copulating with the necks of poems,
bare trees
shivering with the death of our self-righteous
mocking Paradise, we write of stones
— Kailashana, Jul 07, 2010
Share this poem
Critiques
Candlewitch
16 years ago
Dear Anna
Kailashana
16 years ago
Irony, that’s it!
Seren
16 years ago
No words … Brava and a bow
Kailashana
16 years ago
Sigh.~The whole modern world
Seren
16 years ago
Sigh … hugs x x
scribbler
16 years ago
With a
Kailashana
16 years ago
glad you liked the title,
scribbler
16 years ago
I'm BAAA..CK
Join Neopoet to leave a critique
Neopoet is a free community of poets who critique and support each other's writing.