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relativity in the art of spices, tiles and stones

you wanted pure form I wanted essence
compressed black and white tiles
lying 
but we wrote poetry
I had kitchen scents and spices, 
a teacup bittersweet with analogies
pouring somewhere,
the heart doesn't make overtures or
erasures
you had a barn you wanted painted
with phrases that meant more than your
words had to say, or could say without a noose
around our necks

we write these echoes of abandon with flowers wilting
dead and dying 
ripened mangoes dripping off our roguish tongues
students of 
our bodies merging, rendezvousing
parables of light and dark in hours
unforeseen,
twilight gods
awestruck in the tinderbox that is love,
swans copulating with the necks of poems,
bare trees
shivering with the death of our self-righteous
mocking Paradise, we write of stones

 





— Kailashana, Jul 07, 2010

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Anna

I love the irony I felt when I read this piece. Favorite lines: we write these echoes of abandon with flowers wilting dead and dying rippened mangoes dripping off our roguish tongues students of our bodies merging, rendezvousing parables of light and dark in hours unforseen, twilight gods awestruck in the tinderbox that is love, swans copulating with the necks of poems, bare trees shivering with the death of our self-righteous mocking Paradise, we write of stones Always, Cat
Kailashana

Kailashana

15 years 11 months ago

Irony, that’s it!

Irony, that's it! Bittersweet irony, Many thanks Cat. ~ The whole modern world has divided itself into Conservatives and Progressives. The business of Progressives is to go on making mistakes. The business of the Conservatives is to prevent the mistakes from being corrected. G.K. Chesteron
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

No words … Brava and a bow

No words ... Brava and a bow love JayCee x x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
Kailashana

Kailashana

15 years 11 months ago

Sigh.~The whole modern world

Sigh. ~ The whole modern world has divided itself into Conservatives and Progressives. The business of Progressives is to go on making mistakes. The business of the Conservatives is to prevent the mistakes from being corrected. G.K. Chesteron
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Sigh … hugs x x

Sigh ... hugs x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

With a

title like this I had to read it lol.Will return later as short on time at moment.......scribbler
Kailashana

Kailashana

15 years 11 months ago

glad you liked the title,

glad you liked the title, you should have been here, between the titles I threw out and the ones that Barry threw back... Smile. ~ The whole modern world has divided itself into Conservatives and Progressives. The business of Progressives is to go on making mistakes. The business of the Conservatives is to prevent the mistakes from being corrected. G.K. Chesteron
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

I'm BAAA..CK

Ah ha!The combination of love and love of poetry!(I think)Strong contradictory images.......scribbler