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human robot

i think I've lost my emotion.
broken babies don't heed my attention.
uselessly,
i drive around,
trying to break for the car in front of me.

wondering what will happen when i don't.

a malfunctioning human robot.
sparks flying in a brain shot,

work in progress
— bloke, Jul 07, 2010

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 10 months ago

Hello bloke

An interesting theme, to say the least. My favorite lines are: a malfunctioning human robot. sparks flying in a brain shot, Always, Cat