Daisy game

Dear Green Eyes i love your poetry, and this one is really fantastic, i too used to play this game with flowers i see desperation to be loved and its brilliant! much love shirley harrison

First repetitive poem I've ever really liked.Wonder how one more petal would have affected end.Just reread and have to nom..........scribbler

So cute! The repetition does work wonders on this one, in my head this poem has a melody, and a great one too. I think I've seen a movie where the flower's last petal is "loves me not" so the girl just continues with a second flower... You might want to end with an "!" instead of a ".". Antoine

The repetition in this piece is absolutely charming. I love how it goes from hopeful to mournful. The ending line is my favorite! Always, Cat

Funny, emotional and (maybe) biographical...;)

I thought this was wonderful ... I add my stars and praise at this late stage love and hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)

it reminds me of all the depleted dandelion heads i threw away in disgust in my younger days - and some i hugged excitedly beautiful poetry to take me back to my youth thank you love judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

Beautiful, just so lovely. You have such a wonderful talent. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

all before me have commented so wonderfully...i wish to add that for me it was a novel experience... warmly...raj (sublime_ocean)..

Absolutely adore this adorable poem. Love the repetition, the ending, the beginning and the middle. Miles of smiles. ~ "There is a kind of mysticism to writing." ~ Irvine Welsh