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Jul 06, 2010
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PLACES
I guess most folks are just like me
with places where they love to be
locations which can calm their life
and help them to escape from strife
I've got more than I can count
from ocean to a Blue Ridge mount
none amid the metro races
but in quiet and secluded places
Like in a lonely moonlit glade
where proposal long ago was made
to lovely girl 'neath starry skies
one place where my heart still lies
The first land that I ever owned
where skills at building first were honed
constructing home for my young wife
the first of many in our life
Woods where I first took a deer
one hundred miles away from here
long ago clear cut and laid bare
been years since I was last there
A large and years old beaver swamp
almost 2 miles we had to tromp
through wood seldom seen by any other
I used to fish there with my brother
A far secluded mountain valley
where generations used to salley
now hundreds of feet beneath a lake
a reactor's cold water intake
My favorate remote hardwood hill
almost always shaded and still
where forest's furtive creatures slink
a place I like to go and think
All these wild and untamed places
where I go to escape all men's traces
though some are now just memory
they're each and all special to me
with places where they love to be
locations which can calm their life
and help them to escape from strife
I've got more than I can count
from ocean to a Blue Ridge mount
none amid the metro races
but in quiet and secluded places
Like in a lonely moonlit glade
where proposal long ago was made
to lovely girl 'neath starry skies
one place where my heart still lies
The first land that I ever owned
where skills at building first were honed
constructing home for my young wife
the first of many in our life
Woods where I first took a deer
one hundred miles away from here
long ago clear cut and laid bare
been years since I was last there
A large and years old beaver swamp
almost 2 miles we had to tromp
through wood seldom seen by any other
I used to fish there with my brother
A far secluded mountain valley
where generations used to salley
now hundreds of feet beneath a lake
a reactor's cold water intake
My favorate remote hardwood hill
almost always shaded and still
where forest's furtive creatures slink
a place I like to go and think
All these wild and untamed places
where I go to escape all men's traces
though some are now just memory
they're each and all special to me
— scribbler, Jul 06, 2010
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poewriter58
15 years 11 months ago
Stan
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
places
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
beautiful!
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
places
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Beautiful Stan
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
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Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Stan
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
places