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PLACES

I guess most folks are just like me
   with places where they love to be
   locations which can calm their life
   and help them to escape from strife

I've got more than I can count
   from ocean to a Blue Ridge mount
   none amid the metro races
   but in quiet and secluded places

Like in a lonely moonlit glade
   where proposal long ago was made
   to lovely girl 'neath starry skies
   one place where my heart still lies

The first land that I ever owned
   where skills at building first were honed
   constructing home for my young wife
   the first of many in our life

Woods where I first took a deer
   one hundred miles away from here
   long ago clear cut and laid bare
   been years since I was last there

A large and years old beaver swamp
   almost 2 miles we had to tromp
   through wood seldom seen by any other
   I used to fish there with my brother

A far secluded mountain valley
   where generations used to salley
   now hundreds of feet beneath a lake
   a reactor's cold water intake

My favorate remote hardwood hill
   almost always shaded and still
   where forest's furtive creatures slink
   a place I like to go and think

All these wild and untamed places
   where I go to escape all men's traces
   though some are now just memory
   they're each and all special to me


— scribbler, Jul 06, 2010

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Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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poewriter58

15 years 11 months ago

Stan

Very calming and soothing write. Mine is always the ocean ( right now I'd settle for a puddle) I suppose we all have that special place. Lon's is down on the lake fishing. My first poetry book is entitled . The Lady Is An Ocean , so what does that tell you lol. Chrys
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

places

Glad I struck the right note.Still not completely happy with this and will eventually try for a rewrite.thanks for your read and comment
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shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

beautiful!

ah with your poetry Dear Stan i always see such amazing pictures and i would love to have a picnic with you and your dear wife in any of your favourite places! my favourite place would be the beach,to watch the sun set! with much love shirley harrison
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

places

I just write what I see.Come and eat picnic with us I promise it'll be no fuss Susan would surely agree as she also loves the sea On our coast we watch sun rise and lighten up the dim grey skies so hitch your britches,come along we might even sing a song.........scribbler
xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Beautiful Stan

I guess we all have our places that we like to go to remind us of our roots, also a place where we can reminisce and feel alive in a good place. This lovely poem is a great example of how we should look at life, past, present and future. Like the saying goes, “We only live once”. So we should waste it. Beautiful Stan. PS. I’ve been off line for a few days, so I’ve got some catching up to do. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

places

I had noticed your absence and am glad to see you back....scribbler
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Stan

You love your couplets ... and I am rather fond of them myself nice work Smiles love and big hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

places

Is that what I mainly write?I just write and hope for the best.Thanks for kind words......scribbler