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kitchens of a feminine heart

bake my spirit in the ovens of your love
my unclean hands long for the taste of bread
my lips are silent in the prayers of your heat
I can smell you even when the door is closed
between a man and woman
sacred in your domain
life conceived your gift
even the checkerboard tiles of the floor
the black and white
can not be compromised
by the falling crumbs
in the sweep of your fingers
in the order of sugar and salt
I have come from the bridges of rain
with my muddy feet
into your filled cupboards
into the reason of a thousand Mothers
when all was rock and earth
to find a home.


— Orphani, Jul 06, 2010

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Dennis Go

Dennis Go

15 years 11 months ago

Awesome!

What fine display of metaphors! Down to earth love poem scribed with the kitchen! Brilliant!
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Orphani

15 years 11 months ago

Factually I am a consummate

Factually I am a consummate slob. I got the idea for this after getting my ass reamed out for getting artichoke on the ceiling. Thanks D.G B
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shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

this it truly beautiful poetry

dear orphani, what a tender way of writing a poem of love! i just felt the need to hug you at the end! with much love shirley harrison
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Orphani

15 years 11 months ago

Thank you S for your kind

Thank you S for your kind consideration. A woman's place is in the Kitchens of the heart. I like to cook, but I get food everywhere and like to do the dishes later in the week. Anna lit into me when she couldn't find the sink.It was one expedition she didn't care to make with out a whip and chair. Again Thanks S. B
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

15 years 11 months ago

WONDER-FULL BARRY

Ann of Norway WONDER-FULL BARRY:- I remember a poem where the husband comes home and compares his familiar being close to his wife like the kneading of home made bread and I loved that remark, so too here, where you take the everday familiar needs and transform them into a hymn of thanks to the woman you now love so much, what wonders this life has for those who grab them when they come, it is truly a blessing isn't it Barry? And through this I send my love to my dear sister, my Anna as well as yours, Love to you too of course and I love your poem tiles and all!! Ann
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Orphani

15 years 11 months ago

If there is ever a place

If there is ever a place where tempers can flare it's the kitchen. Anna's a neat freak(I have to wash my nose before we kiss),but it's worth it,. and my nose is clean. I swear Ann the woman never farts, but maybe that's more info then you need. Love you much. B
Geezer

Geezer

15 years 11 months ago

Sounds like home to me!...

I have come in with muddy feet, to your filled cupboards, and you sat me down and filled my plate. I sit by your warm hearth, and am content. I paraphrased a little, and couldn't help adding my thoughts, sorry! I loved it, and was enthused! ~ Geezer
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

15 years 11 months ago

Not comparing of course dear Barry!!!

Ann of Norway Under Milk Wood -Dylan Thomas:- Now i her iceberg whit crinoline nightgown, under virtuous polar sheets, in her spruced and scoured dust-defying bedroom in trig and trim Bay View, a house for paying guests, at the top of the town, Mrs Ogmore-Pritchard widow, twice, of Mr Ogmore, linoleum retired, and Mr Pritchard, failed bookmaker, who maddened by besoming, swabbing and scrubbing, the voice of the vacuum cleaner and the fume of polish, ironically swallowed disinfectant, fidgets in her rinsed sleep, wakes in a dream, and nudges in the ribs dead Mr Ogmore, dead Mr Pritchard, ghostly on either side. Mrs Ogmore Pritchard Mr Ogmore! Mr Pritchard! It is time to inhale your balsam. O-Oh, Mrs Ogmore! P-Oh Mrs Pritchard! Mrs O-P-Soon it will be time to get up. Tell me your tasks, in order. O-I must put my pyjamas in the pyjama drawer marked pyjamas. P- I must take my cold bath which is good for me. O-I must wear my flannel band to ward off sciatica. P-I must dress behind the curtain and put on my apron. O- I must blow my nose. Mrs O-P In the garden if you please. O- In a piece of tissue-paper which afterwards burn. P- I must take my salts which are natures friends. O- I must boil the drinking water because of germs. P- I must take my herb tea which is free from tannin. O- And have a charcoal biscuit which is good for me. P-I may smoke one pipe of asthma mixture. Mrs O-P- In the woodshed if you please. P- And dust the parlour and spray the canary. O-I must put on rubber gloves and search the peke for fleas. P-I must dust the blinds and then I must raise them. Mrs O-P-And before you let the sun in, mind it wipes its shoes. etc......... :) :) :) Ann. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uuPO2Kvqlms