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Jul 06, 2010
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kitchens of a feminine heart
bake my spirit in the ovens of your love
my unclean hands long for the taste of bread
my lips are silent in the prayers of your heat
I can smell you even when the door is closed
between a man and woman
sacred in your domain
life conceived your gift
even the checkerboard tiles of the floor
the black and white
can not be compromised
by the falling crumbs
in the sweep of your fingers
in the order of sugar and salt
I have come from the bridges of rain
with my muddy feet
into your filled cupboards
into the reason of a thousand Mothers
when all was rock and earth
to find a home.
my unclean hands long for the taste of bread
my lips are silent in the prayers of your heat
I can smell you even when the door is closed
between a man and woman
sacred in your domain
life conceived your gift
even the checkerboard tiles of the floor
the black and white
can not be compromised
by the falling crumbs
in the sweep of your fingers
in the order of sugar and salt
I have come from the bridges of rain
with my muddy feet
into your filled cupboards
into the reason of a thousand Mothers
when all was rock and earth
to find a home.
— Orphani, Jul 06, 2010
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Critiques
Dennis Go
16 years ago
Awesome!
Orphani
16 years ago
Factually I am a consummate
shirley harrison
16 years ago
this it truly beautiful poetry
Orphani
16 years ago
Thank you S for your kind
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
WONDER-FULL BARRY
Orphani
16 years ago
If there is ever a place
Geezer
16 years ago
Sounds like home to me!...
Orphani
16 years ago
No muddy feet on this floor-
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
Not comparing of course dear Barry!!!
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